Snips and Snails are adults now, with jobs and romantic problems and all the other stuff that comes with growing up, but when Trixie comes to town, they still assemble and act like idiots. A single, mostly drunken night in both a long-running tradition and a relatively bright future.
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Man, sometimes we need stories like this. Thanks for the read
Snails showed up a half-minute later, taking ihs time.
“Happens to the best of us.” he said. “Canterlot keeps flirting with me.”
“Canterlot’s got some good money.” Snails said.
You make this mistake many times. It should be a comma, not a period.
This was an enjoyable read. It'd need significantly more depth to it to be anything great, but it's a very nice piece of fluff.
7211116 Thanks. Dialogue rules always elude me, somehow.
7211147 Lots of people struggle with dialogue rules. It's the single most common mistake I see, to the point where it feels like if I were to take a random author on the site, they're more likely to get it wrong than right.