in an alternative universe goku loses to Frieza on namek and is killed, gohan being the last person on namek left alive other than Frieza the two fought till gohan lost before be blasted out of existence Frieza tells him" have fun in whatever pitiful dimension you end up in." Then everything went blank when he woke up he was in equestria as a pony.he still had his armor and everything else though so...yeah . Will gohan ever get home or will he be stuck in equestria? Find out in this story!!!!!
Chapters (4)
Good so far.tad bit short though
The description immediately drives me away. This is definitely not the best DBZ x MLP crossover I've seen in a long time.
7188944 thank you and sorry about quick start and I'm working on making them longer
7189009 did you read the chapter......I got the chapter titles from character quotes in dragon ball xenoverse so yeah
I'm definitely not planning on reading this, for SEVERAL reasons:
1. What the hell is up with the word count? That ALONE would be enough for me to NOT read a story. You basically wrote HALF a page's worth of words in MS Word. HALF, what the actual hell man?
2. You grammar in both the title and summary, makes me want to ignore it out of principle. You're missing capitalization, and commas.
Those are just the big ones. The BIG, and OBVIOUS, ones. I'm not reading this.
This word count is sad. I want to hope you can turn this into a good story, but this just isn't working for me. I think we should see other stories. No no don't be sad it's not you it's me.
7192814 I understanding
I'll try to fix it...........*sniff*
I'm enjoying it
Ok so I like this story so far it pretty well done my only complaint is it's not that long still gonna like and fave
7269849 thank you
7274278 more now
7433251 I'm so sorry I haven't updated this story in a while I've just been really swamped and haven't had time to write a new chapter I promise I will update it soon
7433612 Why am I reading these titles in TFS's Frieza voice...?
could be a good story. add more length to it tho.