Megalomaniac

After the recent events, Starlight Glimmer thinks she and Trixie need to talk about something.

Now with reading by _NeiglyReads_. Thanks a lot!
Obvious spoilers for 'No Second Prances'.
Edited by VitalSpark, thanks man!

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The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #1 · May 2nd, 2016 · 2 · ·

Very sweet, though I think Trixie was a bit OOC here as I can't see her pouring her heart out, at least not this way. But that's my opinion. We're all entitled to our own.

VampDash

VampDash #2 · May 2nd, 2016 · · ·

Aw.

Spider8ite

Spider8ite #3 · May 2nd, 2016 · · ·

7180160 I think that she would pour it all to Starlight, at least. She is her best friend after all... But I'm happy you enjoy it

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #4 · May 2nd, 2016 · 1 · ·

Actually, she wouldn’t have used her magic for the good at all in the past — it was a big change.

Actually, THAT WAS THE PROBLEM! All she CARED ABOUT was the 'good of ALL' she didn't care about INDIVIDUALS, her only concern was the community!

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #5 · May 2nd, 2016 · · ·

but she actually was really kind to her.

Well, Trixie did attend her school.

Spider8ite

Spider8ite #6 · May 2nd, 2016 · · ·

7180161 I told you depressed ponies was what gave me plots to write, Vamp

VampDash

VampDash #7 · May 2nd, 2016 · · ·

7180814 DAMN YOU SPECTRUM! YOU ACTUALLY MADE ME SHED A TEAR!

Halira

Halira #8 · May 3rd, 2016 · · ·

I think some of the dialog felt a little off for this one. The episode showed that Trixie doesn't talk about herself in the third person unless she is performing or talking about her performance. When she is being just Trixie the pony instead of The Great and Powerful Trixie she might have some haughty ego in her voice but she talks about herself like every other pony would.

Otherwise the story was a nice intimate moment between the two.

Frankie2

Frankie2 #9 · May 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Second story I read with somepony talking to Trixie about her 'final finale' . Not bad.

EclipseSight

EclipseSight #10 · May 3rd, 2016 · · ·

I enjoyed this, though I'm not sure Trixie would call Starlight her Glimmering Assistant. Maybe, though I think it would be Great and Powerful Assistant like she said in the show. Though that would be a huge mouthful to keep saying. Other than that the dialogue was okay but maybe a little too... flat isn't the word, generic maybe. I didn't feel that it had the flair of each characters in some places.

I did like the idea that Starlight stayed behind to watch and make sure everything really was okay. Gave me the thought that Starlight would probably have bailed Trixie out if need came but it was the gesture of getting on stage and helping her up that was hinged on their friendship. Starlight would feel a little responsible if Trixie was hurt in a trick she pushed her to perform

Oh well, just my two pence. Really enjoyed the story besides a minor dialogue nitpick. Good job.

Lakeguy