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Having waited all night to meet Starlight Glimmer and her new friend, Princess Celestia finally gets the opportunity to do just that when Twilight eventually returns with her pupil in tow. Within the halls of Twilight's castle, four ponies sit to share stories, worries, and declarations of friendship.
Spoilers for No Second Prances.
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Starlight, don't sell yourself short. Twilight hasn't taught you a thing, and is incapable of doing so.
Hmmm I wouldn't mind seeing a ship fic of these two from you maybe a sequel?
Okay, animators please insert this real ending to todays episode...
....
What, whaddaya mean the episode's already air....
.....
"Oh, for f--- ... Ponyapples!"
It's a cute fic with plenty of potential. I was really hoping you'd have those two kiss at the end though.
“Apology accepted,
Too bad that doesn't happen in real life.
Trixie was a student at Celestia's school.
Oh, just kiss already!
I'm going to consider this the offical off-screen ending that they couldn't show because of the time spent building up to Trixie's reveal.
Finished reading. Few grammar things I noticed:
"“Perhaps, but then you wouldn't of had your moment in the limelight, would you?” Retorted Trixie.""
Wouldn't have, not Wouldn't of.
Alot
A lot
Trixie, both mares sort comfort in the legs of the other.
Sought instead of sort?
Very enjoyable read, thanks for writing. How it should have ended material here. Although it still did end well.
Yeah, Celestia was sold a bit short, being relegated to the grumpy stuffy guest. You'd think she'd understand. "So your friendship student decided that helping her very first new friend with an important thing was more important than attending some stuffy dinner? That's wonderful!"
All in all, enjoyable story.
Ostrichsized!! Hee hee!! That's a brilliant malapropism for "ostracized".
"looked away in shame, the statement hitting close to home"
Now, this is a better ending than treating Celestia like a third wheel dragged there against her will.
Da'www, so sweet. here, have a Big Mac.
The emoticon, not the burger.
Wow, very nice fanfiction! It portrays realistically what maybe happened after Twilight finally came with Starlight and Trixie to Celestia.
And you acknowledged the problem that Trixie has to leave Ponyville again and that Starlight will feel lonely again without her new friend. That's great!
I also couldn't find any real mistakes, except for some typos and awkward word choices. Great job!
That was a decent read and I do like the premise of what went on after the episode's events and how Celestia plays into the story. However, the spelling and grammar was rough in certain spots and some of the prose could use rewriting or reorganizing. Maybe some extra time in the oven or an editor would've helped, but despite this, I didn't regret reading it. As such, I do hope that you keep on writing, as the story could easily shine with some polish. Best of luck on your future writing projects.
I am actually surpriced that Celestia never learned that Trixie tried to take over the town with alicorn amulet, while Starlight Glimmer brought Equestira to horrible fate multiple times because of her revenge (some time after how Starlight put it a few times in the show "enslaving vilages")
I would like to see Celestia's reaction to that, showing either anger for Starlight for going to far, or be impressed by Twilight's forgiveness as those were serious offenses.
celestia and spike be like:
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couldn't find relevant celestia.
Did Trixie calls Starlight lovely?
IS IT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR THEM TO KISSFYI, when you've got one character talking continuously, leave off the ending quote mark from the paragraphs. Trixie's monologue was confusing because I didn't know if she was trading off lines with someone else.Not bad. Faved. I was hoping for something else, though, something I haven't seen anyone do. I might need to do it myself, if I can ever get working on my stories with any regularity.
This was nice. I really liked you captured the personality of both.
This was such a delightful read. The emotions and personalities of the two star mares were conveyed very well. This would have been a great ending/addendum to No Second Prances. I always wondered how that conversation would have went, given how done Celestia was with the whole situation.
Trixie and Starlight were characterized perfectly here. Celestia and Twilight were almost an afterthought, but that flows in with the point/theme of the episode itself.
You are definitely worth following!
That's it! I'm treating this as canon. YOU CAN'T STOP ME! THIS IS CANON!!!