A Series of Somewhat Silly Shenanigans and Sex-sploits Surface as a Stoic Scarlett Stallion Secures a Stud license to Sensually Service Sex Starved mares.
Love Tap has always been my preferred name for Button's Mom. Just seems to fit. To answer your questions, yes to showing the "training" and double yes to including Cherry Jubilee. Mac is just on a string of cougar/MILFs, isn't he?
One small thing I would also say is to take more care in your editing. Not going to list off everything, but they are all relatively simple things to fix. One I will say is that the word for Mac's physical appearance is spelled "physique".
Yes please to a proper threesome. Now I get my magic proof paper, roll it up, and start hitting Lyra and Bonbon on the nose with it. Bad Lyra and Bonbon bad, that is not how you treat a participate. Trixie was great, just about what I thought was going to happen (I figured she would have been a total sub in bed).
I'd like to see Mac in a real threesome. Still, Love Tap asking about birth control makes me wonder how Mac would react to a client hiring him to impregnate her.
I would like to see Zecora. Think about it she is all alone in the Everfree. She could be one of the mares, who are into roleplay. A poor defenceless mare, on her own in a dark and dangerous wood.
To be honest, I think Big Mac may need a Lawyer/agent to help prevent mares he doesn't want to have sex with from harassing him. I would like to suggest Twilight or Fluttershy. It would be interesting to see Fluttershy use her powers of assertion to stop a mare. Other suggestions would be
Luna or Celestia visit, so the mare arranges for Mac to stud them, despite the well muscled Guards/studs there. Sex education Night with Mrs Cheerlie, which scars Applebloom for life, after watching a live demonstration. Aloe or Lotus, want to open up a possible message with a happy ending and try to contract Big Mac to be the happy ending. Since mares really like Big Mac, as a stud, the Cakes or another business (Mr. Rich) tries to get Big Mac to sponsor their product Spike doesn't know what a Stud is, and tells Twilight (After he sees the mares falling over Big Mac) he wants to be one, so Twilight arranges for Big Mac to talk to Spike.
I hope these ideas help. If they do reply to this.
I would love to see the Mayor and Cherry Jubilee threesome happen. I would also like to suggest Miss Harshwhinney, Fluttershy's mother, and as weird as it sounds I would also suggest Spoiled Rich.
Big Mac paused and just held there mare as he let him ride out her orgasm. Once she her breathing returned to normal
Bit of a grammatical error run here, might just want to clean it up. Enjoying the ides of Big Mac/mayor 'training session' and a Cherry Jubilee sounds just as interesting.
Mac is just on a string of cougar/MILFs, isn't he?
Well next chapter will be a change of pace in that regard
Thanks for the feedback, I will look back over it and keep that in mind for future chapters.
7996155 Yeah that was pretty bad of Lyra and Bon Bon. Though with those two I think Big Mac probably saw it coming and at least with him he wasn't emotionally invested in the threesome.
7996207 Honestly, I think he's made peace with the fact that he may get customer's that want him to help get pregnant. Though he wouldn't be insistant on being involved in the foal's life I think he would be more insistant on making sure the baby would be raised in a suitable environment.
He's not set in a single ideal of how or where to raise a child but he's not going to help mare bring a child into a world where they aren't properly loved and cared for.
So he'd be willing to help a single mother have a child so long as she had the means to care for it but he'd would be against impregnating a mare who just wants a baby to "save" a broken marriage.
Still, it is food for thought.
7996239 Zecora is definitly on the "To Do" list (pun intended )
I hadn't thought of her being into role play but I kind of like that idea.
7996514 Harshwhinny is another definite of the "To Do" list.
Fluttershy's mom is not one I had considered but I will give some thought on, if only for comedic potential of having Fluttershy ask AJ if hiring Big Mac to have sex with her mom would count as breaking the agreement the mane six had made.
Spoiled Rich...I'll have to get back to you that one.
7996323 Thank you for so many suggestions, it was great food for thought
I would definitely love to see Fluttershy and her animal friends acting as security for Big Mac. Though I do imagine all of the mane six would help out in dealing with mares that are over stepping their bounds.
I am definitely keen on have Big Mac "cross paths" with one or both of the royal sisters.
I could imagine Big Mac and Cheerilee doing sex ed class for adults (you know to help them develop better technique) and possibly offer to help be a visual aid for teenage students but Apple Bloom & Co are still preteen AND there is no way Big Mac would comfortable having sex infront of any members of his family, regardless of how old. Besides, if anyone is going to mentaly scar Apple Bloom it's going to be Granny Smith.
If Berry Punch is anything to go by, I do imagine that other businesses in town, such as the Spa ponies, the Cakes and Mr Rich would want to cash in on his spike in popularity.
Spike wanting to take up studing could be interesting. I could almost imagine it being one of his get rarity to like him schemes but him not actually realising what it means to be a stud. Though I'm not sure if he would be considered old enough, I mean he's constantly refered to as a baby dragon, he hatched when Twilight was still a filly and his maturarity flucuates between being juvienile and being on par or surpasing the mane six depending on the situation. Still, it is food for thought.
7997519 Honestly, I picture the mayor as some one who, if given the choice, would rather be in control than relinquise control.
I mean she'll willing to let someone take point if she trust them to make her feel good but she definitly is more of the dominant side than on the submissive.
Short answer. I'm not interested in doing Apple Bloom angst or really involving any filly/colt age characters aside from minor cameos or potential comedic moments such as if the CMC made ballon animals out of Big Mac's condom stash or Rarity trying to explain Sweetie Bell that Big Mac's stud ring doesn't mean he's engaged.
Long answer. Apple Bloom is still at the stage where most of this goes over her head and she'll simply brush it off as the grown ups acting weird again.
Her family isn't going to lie to her if she asked but Big Mac's not exactly going to being studding right in front of her.
Most mares also aren't exactly going to up Big Mac and go "Let's go f!" when there is a preteen standing right there.
The town isn't going to treat her any differently, studding is legal and crown endorsed, the apple family founded the town and AJ is a national hero and a close friend of the local princess. No one is going to speak badly of them.
7998136 forgive me, but I could just picture DT teasing Apple Bloom by calling Big Mac a whore... Apple Bloom tries to defend her family honor, reluctantly Sweetie Belle informs that DT is right with her use of the word, Apple Bloom losses it, Applejack is called in to take Apple Bloom and the younger Apple shouts that she hates Big Mac and goes to her room and cries herself to sleep. This causes another argument between Granny and AJ
TL;DR: There are unforeseen familiar consequences to the Apple family stud tradition to the Apple family
She crawled towards Big Mac, with obvious plans to start round two. Such plans were thwarted by her own body as she collapsed on top of the stallion in exhaustion. "Just as soon as I catch my breath."
7998117 Technically the Spike becoming a Stud, is a scheme. He doesn't understand what a Stud means or that he is too young. All he thinks is that it may help him be with Rarity. I would love to see both Twilight and Mac telling him what is means to be a Stud. It would be more of a humorous chapter.
I don't really want to see the mayor for the time being but since you already have it planned there's no helping that. But I'd suggest to lay off the mayor for a few chapters after that.
Idk how Cherry would be part of the equation but I guess she's as good as any other mare
8011730 Well to be honest, I was on the fence about returning to the mayor as mainly my focus is introducing new mares and finding different scenarios rather than return visits. But I'm to the idea if there is something new I can do with it. So while I was thinking on what I wanted to do with Cherry Jublilee and the idea of her, the mayor and Big Mac having an evening together came to me so I figured why not put the idea to the readers and see if they would be interested.
Though first we have photo finish, and after doing the Mayor/Cherry chapter (since reader response seems quite positive to the idea) it's definitly on new mares for a while.
With that said, did you have any mares you'd like to see? I do already have a few mares planned out but I also like finding out if there are any the readers would interested in seeing,
I love this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next to Big Mac, of course I would love to see a part where Princess Celestia or Luna hear about Big Mac becoming a Stud, of course Luna could find out through the dreams of the mares of Ponyville, most likely from Sweetcream Scoops who Big Mac turned down. I would love to see Big Mac put Mayor Mare (AKA Ivory Scrolls) in her place and Dom her instead of her Doming him, and I have read many fanfics where the authors use Ivory Scrolls as the Mayor's real name but her title is still Mayor Mare when she is working.
The clerk was Sweetcream Scoops, a lime green unicorn mare and number nine on his Top Ten list of things he did not want put his dick in. Number ten of that list was a badger hole. Number eight was a live badger.
Something tells me that Sweetcream, is not so much need of a make over, but more like a retread.
Love Tap is a great name. I'm enjoying the story.
The Mayor and Cherry? Yes, please.
Button's Mom in yoga pants?
No fair Mac.
Love Tap has always been my preferred name for Button's Mom. Just seems to fit. To answer your questions, yes to showing the "training" and double yes to including Cherry Jubilee. Mac is just on a string of cougar/MILFs, isn't he?
One small thing I would also say is to take more care in your editing. Not going to list off everything, but they are all relatively simple things to fix. One I will say is that the word for Mac's physical appearance is spelled "physique".
Yes please to a proper threesome. Now I get my magic proof paper, roll it up, and start hitting Lyra and Bonbon on the nose with it. Bad Lyra and Bonbon bad, that is not how you treat a participate. Trixie was great, just about what I thought was going to happen (I figured she would have been a total sub in bed).
I'd like to see Mac in a real threesome.
Still, Love Tap asking about birth control makes me wonder how Mac would react to a client hiring him to impregnate her.
I would like to see Zecora. Think about it she is all alone in the Everfree.
She could be one of the mares, who are into roleplay. A poor defenceless mare,
on her own in a dark and dangerous wood.
To be honest, I think Big Mac may need a Lawyer/agent to help prevent mares he doesn't want to have sex with from harassing him. I would like to suggest Twilight or Fluttershy. It would be interesting to see Fluttershy use her powers of assertion to stop a mare. Other suggestions would be
Luna or Celestia visit, so the mare arranges for Mac to stud them, despite the well muscled Guards/studs there.
Sex education Night with Mrs Cheerlie, which scars Applebloom for life, after watching a live demonstration.
Aloe or Lotus, want to open up a possible message with a happy ending and try to contract Big Mac to be the happy ending.
Since mares really like Big Mac, as a stud, the Cakes or another business (Mr. Rich) tries to get Big Mac to sponsor their product
Spike doesn't know what a Stud is, and tells Twilight (After he sees the mares falling over Big Mac) he wants to be one, so Twilight arranges for Big Mac to talk to Spike.
I hope these ideas help. If they do reply to this.
I would love to see the Mayor and Cherry Jubilee threesome happen. I would also like to suggest Miss Harshwhinney, Fluttershy's mother, and as weird as it sounds I would also suggest Spoiled Rich.
Bit of a grammatical error run here, might just want to clean it up.
Enjoying the ides of Big Mac/mayor 'training session' and a Cherry Jubilee sounds just as interesting.
Do you think Mayor Mare is secretly wanting to be extremely submissive?
I have to wonder, how does Big Mac being a stud affect Apple Bloom...
7996115
Since when are yoga pants ever fair?
7996134
Well next chapter will be a change of pace in that regard
Thanks for the feedback, I will look back over it and keep that in mind for future chapters.
7996155
Yeah that was pretty bad of Lyra and Bon Bon. Though with those two I think Big Mac probably saw it coming and at least with him he wasn't emotionally invested in the threesome.
7996207
Honestly, I think he's made peace with the fact that he may get customer's that want him to help get pregnant. Though he wouldn't be insistant on being involved in the foal's life I think he would be more insistant on making sure the baby would be raised in a suitable environment.
He's not set in a single ideal of how or where to raise a child but he's not going to help mare bring a child into a world where they aren't properly loved and cared for.
So he'd be willing to help a single mother have a child so long as she had the means to care for it but he'd would be against impregnating a mare who just wants a baby to "save" a broken marriage.
Still, it is food for thought.
7996239
Zecora is definitly on the "To Do" list (pun intended )
I hadn't thought of her being into role play but I kind of like that idea.
7996514
Harshwhinny is another definite of the "To Do" list.
Fluttershy's mom is not one I had considered but I will give some thought on, if only for comedic potential of having Fluttershy ask AJ if hiring Big Mac to have sex with her mom would count as breaking the agreement the mane six had made.
Spoiled Rich...I'll have to get back to you that one.
7996323
Thank you for so many suggestions, it was great food for thought
I would definitely love to see Fluttershy and her animal friends acting as security for Big Mac. Though I do imagine all of the mane six would help out in dealing with mares that are over stepping their bounds.
I am definitely keen on have Big Mac "cross paths" with one or both of the royal sisters.
I could imagine Big Mac and Cheerilee doing sex ed class for adults (you know to help them develop better technique) and possibly offer to help be a visual aid for teenage students but Apple Bloom & Co are still preteen AND there is no way Big Mac would comfortable having sex infront of any members of his family, regardless of how old. Besides, if anyone is going to mentaly scar Apple Bloom it's going to be Granny Smith.
If Berry Punch is anything to go by, I do imagine that other businesses in town, such as the Spa ponies, the Cakes and Mr Rich would want to cash in on his spike in popularity.
Spike wanting to take up studing could be interesting. I could almost imagine it being one of his get rarity to like him schemes but him not actually realising what it means to be a stud. Though I'm not sure if he would be considered old enough, I mean he's constantly refered to as a baby dragon, he hatched when Twilight was still a filly and his maturarity flucuates between being juvienile and being on par or surpasing the mane six depending on the situation. Still, it is food for thought.
7996935
Thanks I've fixed it
7997519
Honestly, I picture the mayor as some one who, if given the choice, would rather be in control than relinquise control.
I mean she'll willing to let someone take point if she trust them to make her feel good but she definitly is more of the dominant side than on the submissive.
7997662
Frankly, not that much.
Short answer.
I'm not interested in doing Apple Bloom angst or really involving any filly/colt age characters aside from minor cameos or potential comedic moments such as if the CMC made ballon animals out of Big Mac's condom stash or Rarity trying to explain Sweetie Bell that Big Mac's stud ring doesn't mean he's engaged.
Long answer.
Apple Bloom is still at the stage where most of this goes over her head and she'll simply brush it off as the grown ups acting weird again.
Her family isn't going to lie to her if she asked but Big Mac's not exactly going to being studding right in front of her.
Most mares also aren't exactly going to up Big Mac and go "Let's go f!" when there is a preteen standing right there.
The town isn't going to treat her any differently, studding is legal and crown endorsed, the apple family founded the town and AJ is a national hero and a close friend of the local princess. No one is going to speak badly of them.
7998136 forgive me, but I could just picture DT teasing Apple Bloom by calling Big Mac a whore... Apple Bloom tries to defend her family honor, reluctantly Sweetie Belle informs that DT is right with her use of the word, Apple Bloom losses it, Applejack is called in to take Apple Bloom and the younger Apple shouts that she hates Big Mac and goes to her room and cries herself to sleep. This causes another argument between Granny and AJ
TL;DR: There are unforeseen familiar consequences to the Apple family stud tradition to the Apple family
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If you plan to write a 'country chapter', any chance to see Cherry Jubilee with Chickadee?
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7998117
Technically the Spike becoming a Stud, is a scheme. He doesn't understand what a Stud means or that he is too young. All he thinks is that it may help him be with Rarity. I would love to see both Twilight and Mac telling him what is means to be a Stud. It would be more of a humorous chapter.
the scenes are nice but one thing i'm interested in seeing is Big mac dealing with a mare who wants him to impregnate her
7996514 hadn't thought of spoiled rich till reading your comment, but i can see that heh heh
*No clothing was harmed in the making of this chapter
8000014
True, although a sweater was yelled at for five hours.
I don't really want to see the mayor for the time being but since you already have it planned there's no helping that. But I'd suggest to lay off the mayor for a few chapters after that.
Idk how Cherry would be part of the equation but I guess she's as good as any other mare
8011730
Well to be honest, I was on the fence about returning to the mayor as mainly my focus is introducing new mares and finding different scenarios rather than return visits. But I'm to the idea if there is something new I can do with it. So while I was thinking on what I wanted to do with Cherry Jublilee and the idea of her, the mayor and Big Mac having an evening together came to me so I figured why not put the idea to the readers and see if they would be interested.
Though first we have photo finish, and after doing the Mayor/Cherry chapter (since reader response seems quite positive to the idea) it's definitly on new mares for a while.
With that said, did you have any mares you'd like to see? I do already have a few mares planned out but I also like finding out if there are any the readers would interested in seeing,
8012648 something I'd like to see? Hmmmm let me think.
I would like to see cheating wife at some point, maybe mrs rich. Aside from that I'd like to see Trixie, Derpy and Zecora.
I love this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next to Big Mac, of course I would love to see a part where Princess Celestia or Luna hear about Big Mac becoming a Stud, of course Luna could find out through the dreams of the mares of Ponyville, most likely from Sweetcream Scoops who Big Mac turned down. I would love to see Big Mac put Mayor Mare (AKA Ivory Scrolls) in her place and Dom her instead of her Doming him, and I have read many fanfics where the authors use Ivory Scrolls as the Mayor's real name but her title is still Mayor Mare when she is working.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
How is the next chapter progressing?
8282064
Alright, I hope to have the next chapter up before the end of July.
The clerk was Sweetcream Scoops, a lime green unicorn mare and number nine on his Top Ten list of things he did not want put his dick in. Number ten of that list was a badger hole. Number eight was a live badger.
Something tells me that Sweetcream, is not so much need of a make over, but more like a retread.