A Series of Somewhat Silly Shenanigans and Sex-sploits Surface as a Stoic Scarlett Stallion Secures a Stud license to Sensually Service Sex Starved mares.
Wow, this chapter was awesome. Watching Mac be afraid of Sweetcream Scoops was extremely funny and the bet with Berry Punch was a great way to introduce the plot of the chapter. AJ being overprotective of Big Mac is always hilarious, the fact that some of the girls got drunk (with Twilight wanting to screw a jukebox), and Fluttershy's drink of choice brought me many good laughs. The scene between Berry and Big Mac was extremely hot, especially how insatiable and skilled Berry proved to be. Fluttershy's fake story to AJ was shocking and funny, though a good way to keep AJ from being overprotective. Lastly, Twilight's last words in the chapter were epic gold. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
7930320 Hopefully by the end Febuary, start of March. December/January have been crazy with work so I'm only now starting to get time for writing. Thank you for your paitence.
The guy just told you twice not to make things awkward and not 5 minutes later you mention wanting a 3 way with his sister. Do you like black eyes caramel? That's how you gain them.
I think part of it is just because Big Mac and Caramel are good friends, you can joke about stuff about that when both of them have been into the shit. Plus Mac knows that Caramel has been crushing on his sister since they were colts, so Caramel knows when to stop. Not to mention that Caramel is taken (now if his marefriend would actually take the hint...and leave Mac alone...)
...and related to that, Mac doesn't have much to stand on with protecting Applejack, just like Applejack no longer has a need to protect Big Mac from other mares. Let's face it, stallions want to fuck Applejack, and--more because it's BIG MAC, the stud ring is just extra--mares want to fuck Big Mac. Intercourse is gonna happen, it's better to be prepared for it and take it like an adult then go all "You best steer clear from my brother/sister" and actively try to play cock block with every pony that so much as give a wink...
I think you can meddle in his affairs now Applejack. Just this one time.
Wow, this chapter was awesome. Watching Mac be afraid of Sweetcream Scoops was extremely funny and the bet with Berry Punch was a great way to introduce the plot of the chapter. AJ being overprotective of Big Mac is always hilarious, the fact that some of the girls got drunk (with Twilight wanting to screw a jukebox), and Fluttershy's drink of choice brought me many good laughs. The scene between Berry and Big Mac was extremely hot, especially how insatiable and skilled Berry proved to be. Fluttershy's fake story to AJ was shocking and funny, though a good way to keep AJ from being overprotective. Lastly, Twilight's last words in the chapter were epic gold. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
I'm surprised about the update. Great chapter. I do wonder is Sassafly for a birthday present for Caramel will rent out Big Mac.
Actually why have no mares done that. I bet a lot of all mare birthday parties could buy a stud for the night. Will we get a chapter like that?
Great chapter, but I found a minor thing you may want to edit.
"her"
Lightweight Sparkle Princess of Hangovers - I hope there are pictures of it.
Berry didn't say anything about having sex outside the premises.
Jeez Twi, it's your responsibility to handle what you order to drink, not the bartender's! Don't club poor Big Mac over that. He did warn you.
Brilliant.
When could we be expecting another chapter?
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Hopefully by the end Febuary, start of March. December/January have been crazy with work so I'm only now starting to get time for writing. Thank you for your paitence.
The guy just told you twice not to make things awkward and not 5 minutes later you mention wanting a 3 way with his sister. Do you like black eyes caramel? That's how you gain them.
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I think part of it is just because Big Mac and Caramel are good friends, you can joke about stuff about that when both of them have been into the shit. Plus Mac knows that Caramel has been crushing on his sister since they were colts, so Caramel knows when to stop. Not to mention that Caramel is taken (now if his marefriend would actually take the hint...and leave Mac alone...)
...and related to that, Mac doesn't have much to stand on with protecting Applejack, just like Applejack no longer has a need to protect Big Mac from other mares. Let's face it, stallions want to fuck Applejack, and--more because it's BIG MAC, the stud ring is just extra--mares want to fuck Big Mac. Intercourse is gonna happen, it's better to be prepared for it and take it like an adult then go all "You best steer clear from my brother/sister" and actively try to play cock block with every pony that so much as give a wink...
....at least that's how I see it.