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Troublesome Beast
I don't know, man. Those weasels were on fire when I got here.
Troublesome Beast
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I am greatly aroused and confused as this appears to be clop but I can't find the clop
7158092 Definitely glad to hear you're enjoying it, not quite sure what you mean by can't find the clop-- you mean other than the fisting, oral, analingus, and BDSM, or am I getting too cerebral in those sections? This is only fic #2 for me, so I really appreciate all feedback.
I'm glad to see that the group isn't dead. (You know which group I'm talking about.)
7159989 I think so, anyway! Relatively new here. But I'm writing what I'd like to read, so all vaguely relevant stuff I wanna boost, y'know?
7160034 Don't worry. You and me, bby, we'll go far in this world. Ring me up if you need an editor.
7160125 Probably will in a few days, thank you! Right now I'm expanding on and adding to Hunting Season, and I've got like 18 chapters in the buffer that need fixing. When I've completed Fluttershy ("Stare into the Thighs of Twi!") and have started Pinkie ("Pie for a Twi, Pussy for a Pinkie") I'll PM you. I really appreciate the offer!
Your cover art is hot!
7165827 Hooboy yes, smoking. Not mine, posted without permission, etc. so may one day disappear if the artist disapproves, but. Drool, I do, for now.
Looks like Twilight is playing Game of Thrones.
7185460 Well, she IS making other princesses (the Mane Six are all Alicorns... has to do with the main story line of Hunting Season) submit to her, ground beneath her
heelbutt.7258858 Thank you! I'm working on the last bits of Pinkie Part II but it keeps getting longer. I think in the future I will try to avoid more than three people in the room without planning for a much, much longer chapter.
why was this added to the ponies big and small group? does this contain macro/micro?....
7281964 90% macro, no micro, one normal, one small, if that's sufficient? If not, I apologize. Twilight is 8' tall; Dash and Shy are 7' each. Pinkie is 7'6"; Flare is ... six three, I think? Six four? Not sure what I wrote, and Spitfire is 5'2" or 5'3" (I'm at work on my chromebook so I haven't had a chance to look up things specifically as I wrote them)
7282167 ouch , is that what's passing for macro these days? that's just some regular old size difference....
10/10 will read again.
7292223 Thank you very much! I hope it was worth the wait.
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Twilight's tits, are the biggest aren't they? Like, the only mare who's tits are bigger, is Celestia? Just want to make sure
7334457 For the Alicorns, in terms of sheer BOOBS, it goes Celestia > Cadance > Luna > Twilight = Applejack > Fluttershy > Pinkie > Rarity > Rainbow Dash. Twilight's got more curve and much more muscle mass-- 60" biceps to Applejack's 50"-- than AJ, though Fluttershy and Pinkie's rumps are national freaking treasures. Yes, I am a perv enough to have them written down in the same list that includes their divine spheres, assistants, archmages, and familiars.
Speaking of which, while it's a distraction from the Orange and Apple things, I got a big inspiration for Ms. Harshwhinny, who has become Cadance's personal assistant, like Raven to Celestia, so we'll be seeing Cadance's quadruple Zs in person shortly. :)
DAMN it, Beast! How do you expect me to be productive when you've got this excellent writing to distract me? You really are troublesome!
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It's all a part of my secret plan to convert more people to writing about buff, busty mares with a taste for kink.
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Oops! You didn't read that.
H.A.W.T.
Highly anticipated wordsmithery, Trouble!
7361924 Thanks. Other than the fact that the chapter length is a bit ginormous, I'm actually more proud of Applesat than I am of Harsh, Hyper Life; this one speaks to a wiiide variety of my kinks.
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Your chapters merely resemble the mares they depict, my good sir! Big, yes, but strong, for all that.
You should do an epilogue chapter at the end where all the girls gang up on Twilight and dominate her for a change
7479607 Oh, they occasionally get her. It wouldn't be fun otherwise. But I have a slightly different epilogue and prologue in mind. If I can get out from under current issues, though.
I need more amazonian mares crushing their victims between their tits. If Twi and the Mane 6 are all amazonian alicorns in Twi's castle, does that mean they have full authority to "toy" with criminals?
7545579 They're not permitted to abuse prisoners, no. One particular person with some spectacular personal issues volunteered for similar treatment under some very, very obscure clan laws; his story will be out Soon (tm); it's mostly delayed for the rewrite to make it less of a fiasco.
Please tell me this isn't dead... :<
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Not dead, per se. I’ve been having a hard time RL, and I’m fighting to get the emotional wherewithal to write again. I do hope to finish it, though.
Once again, wow! If this was any hotter, my screen would be a molten pool of slag!
Small typo: "And Flare's had the cum of two alicorn mares on his face for a bit [...]"
Should be "her". There are a few places where Flare's name isn't capitalized, too, but I'm on mobile, sorry.
I... don't think mascara means what you think it means. Mascara is meant to go on eyelashes. The colored powder that gets put on the lids is eyeshadow, and if it's clumpy then it should really be thrown out. Do you mean that it's caked on thickly?
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Probably not; I wonder why that showed up. Time to poke at things.
Did this die?
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Technically no. I'm just very sick (of the long-term, chronic kind) and when my last doctor retired, the doctor I went to was... not very good, and constrained by a really, really stupid local corporation's bureaucracy to boot. Things got very, very bad for me. I'm doing better, but I'm significantly more prone to getting exhausted mentally and physically, so while-- for example-- I have parts of the next intended chapter here written, it's extremely slow going. My apologies.
Subspace persona?
Can’t wait for the next part!
Who are the astrals?
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Basically, BDSM is a game, not reality, but Alicorns have the ability to make imagination far, far too real. So when they're playing subs (or doms, domspace personas like Mistress Sun), they act out desires and roles that accumulate personas. Flutters becomes very "broodie"-- submissive, mewling, bright-eyed and pseudo-innocent over a horny, slutty core. Rainbow Dash's arrogance turns into Dashie, The Most Awesome Slave Of Them All, where her arrogance becomes how dedicated she is to serving others, rather her image-seeking. Rarity's hyper-hauteur becomes a very Lady's Maid with a Kinky Twist, etc.
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The Astral/Elemental divide is something I created in order to distinguish between the ancient, powerful alicorns with their full powers and aspects-- aurora manes, immense sizes, full access to divine realms and influence, etc-- and the younger ones, who are Big and Badass, but closer to superheroes who can give other people superpowers. So the Astrals are those who have astral bodies-- Sun and Moon-- and the Elementals are the ones who represent the Elements of Harmony, five of the Mane Six. The Astrals affect the ground states of reality, concrete, powerful things primarily, but (Luna->Dreams, Celestia->Perfection) have some abstract influence. The Elementals, on the other hand, primarily interact with abstract things (Rainbow Dash -> Loyalty, Applejack -> Honesty, etc.) but are developing their connection to fundamental properties of the world that they have to terraform-- excuse me, ponyform-- to keep it from breaking apart (RD -> Storms, Applejack->the Earth, etc.)
(They all each control one aspect of a Pathfinder/D&D-esque magic system; Celestia -> Transmutation, Luna-> Illusions, RD-> Evocation, AJ->Abjuration, Rarity -> Divination, etc. but in the long run, the Elementals and Cadance will pass those on to their children, gaining some other quality; RD-> Alacrity, AJ-> Protection, Rarity -> Foresight, etc.)
Twilight and Cadance are in a sort of halfway zone, each for different reasons. Each has a primary abstract influence (Friendship and Love) but while Cadance is older and has had time to develop her powers (Love, Lust, and Enchantment/Communication), Twilight has a tie to immense cosmological _and_ reality energies on a scale with the Astrals (Friendship, Magic, and the Stars), but hasn't the age or experience to wield them as thoroughly as Cadance does.
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Alas, I never really was able to make it through Pt II but I'll be trying to post the fragments I'd made here later.
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I see.