The Sun's Dominance

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Comment posted by The Derpy Division deleted May 19th, 2016

Legend Of St Nazaire

Legend Of St Nazaire #2 · Mar 18th, 2016 · 2 · 13 · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

I use to have a brain tumour but now after reading this and it jumping through all the loop holes I can feel that very tumour coming back.

Phearity

Phearity #3 · Mar 19th, 2016 · 8 · 4 · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

idk what those guys are on about. This is nice so far.

TheLandgrave

TheLandgrave #4 · Mar 20th, 2016 · 7 · 5 · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

While you definitely have some ways to go on the technical side of writing, this was nonetheless entertaining.

I'll be keeping my eyes on this.

Youwotmate

Youwotmate #5 · Mar 20th, 2016 · 1 · 11 · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

Wow, well suicide looks like a nice option after reading this.

SafeGuard

SafeGuard #6 · Mar 21st, 2016 · 3 · · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

I really don't understand the hate here. The story has a lot of potential and I look forward to where it's going.

gRievoUS

gRievoUS #7 · Mar 22nd, 2016 · · · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

The date on chapter is 12th Oct 2014. But I saw it in "Last updated" several days ago.
How is that possible? Was it updated, or just featured?

Kalreas

Kalreas #8 · Mar 27th, 2016 · · · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

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That would be because I first started the story back in 2014.

I'm only just now releasing what I had written down for it, and I'm not sure entirely if I'll continue it or not, but it's on my mind for the stories I'm updating and finishing now that I've delicately neglected for so long.

gRievoUS

gRievoUS #9 · Mar 27th, 2016 · · · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

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Ok then. Hope you will finish this story.
Cover art is amazing btw

Nalesia

Nalesia #10 · Apr 9th, 2016 · · · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

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Hope you will. Don't be discouraged by that one person with three accounts hating on this story. He does that on every princest related story.

It's nice.

Kalreas

Kalreas #11 · Apr 10th, 2016 · · 1 · The Stars' Bodily Attraction ·

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Yeah I might continue the story shortly. I don't know. I have a lot I'm working on lately and I just feel like wasting my time on games more instead of writing or animating like I'm trying to now.

Dented Thorn