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*squees* Yes! New fic oh yes,yes,yes,yes, Yes!
What everyone needs is an orgy just to have a night to let go. They could invite Twilight and Trixie and maybe Fluer. Afterwards, they may be more willing to talk about what is bothering them.
As for what happened in the chapter, I'm looking forward to what Selene does for her vacation. I'm hoping she meets Twilight who discovered what happened to the stallion she loved, I'm sure Twilight would be interested to learn about Tartarus.
Hmm, what does the devil herself do for vacation?
And how will a Princess devoted to peace and harmony handle a place devoted to torment and despair?
oh shit that description , making things sound like they're going to get back to a 10 again....
Why does it feel that Luna and Celedtia arnt in love, it just seems like hey are sisters with benefits and its always been that way, it seems the love bit is forced which I hate.
I see, the link goes both ways between them, magic and mind...
Oh dear, Cadance with Chryssy's personality and vice versa...
6574979 Well, I'm very sorry to hear that you feel that way. I've tried very hard to make their relationship very real. It's complicated--to say the least--but they go through the ups and downs that any committed relationship will endure. At their core though, I feel that they have a true, binding love for each other.
Thanks for the feedback, still.
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Yeah...there's a chance that things are gonna get a little messy from that...
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Just the smallest of chances hmmm?
Celestia's rump sounds like it'll have some competition soon.
6583603 But still their relationship feels really off to me, I can't enjoy the story because it doesn't feel like they are in love. Plus I still have the feeling of a missed opportunity to turn this into Twilunestia, which would of fit absolutely perfectly for this kind of Story.
Yeah this series has inspired me to my own Princest story, but my one ends in tears and death because it's me, I don't like happy ending. But I am still not sure this story should keep going, it feels like it's been drawn out for the Princest (which feels very forced) and not the story.
But this is just my opinion.
6616425 I totally understand. And, for what it's worth, I am ending the series. This is the penultimate one. I'm just wanting to wrap up the plot threads that I have started. So, there is Riposte, and then one more after it, and then it is done. Much for the reasons you state, actually: I feel the story has run its course and it's time to bring it to a close.
And, btw, I am NEVER bothered by constructive criticism. I value it, actually.
Cadance, oh Cadance, Cadance, Cadance! You NEVER tempt fate like that!
*Sits back with popcorn* This is gonna be good!
uh, yeah, Cadence? Crysie? its worse...
Aww yeah, finally changelings being mentioned living in Canterlot.
Wow, that plan... Chryssie, you may want to rethink it.
Oooooh, Selene's back!
Cya
Raziel-chan
Hahah, wow. Dat gun b gud.
And I wonder how will Selene react when she finds out what her arrival caused.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Well. The fecal matter is about to come into violent contact with the oscillating unit.
Need moaaaaaar, this is just too awesome!
Cya
Raziel-chan
Sorry it took me so long to get to this fic XD. I look forward to it though, this has truly been an amazing series. Although I wonder how the dying love between Tia and Luna, and Caddy and Shiny will be handled.
needs end " marks.
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I'll actually be sad to see this series end. Unlike Derpy there I don't see it as forced. It's had a strong over-arching story, with the Princest thrown in there. That and we've still have yet to see Tirek. A conclusion on the Cold Heart story arc (What with the skin stealer there, and the Princess hate), there's still the Red Ling thing going on there. Things between Cadance and Shining Armor [that was brought up many stories ago], and there's still lots that can be worked out / done.
Still this is a good series, and if this is the penultimate one, I hope that it and the next one don't end to soon XD. Still you made quite the series, and it's been a good ride ^_^.
Move down a line.
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Dang this is starting to get even more interesting.
How the bloody hell did I miss this?! How did it slip under my radar for so long? This injustice shall be rectified.
Trixie referring to herself in the first and third person in the same sentence is a little jarring.
Since it is being used as an honorific, "Miss" should be capitalized here.
Shortening Summer's' name to Summer is a... an interesting choice. ...Though seeing it there with the apostrophes on either end of the s, I can see why you made it. It would be easier with Summer's' possessives and the other things that would just look odd, weird, or silly with a possessive apostrophe s before it.
"Get out of town" sounds more like a threat than an invitation. Perhaps "leave town"?
It may not be the same sentence, but the third and first person speech pattern change is still a little jarring.
Ha! Heteronyms.
"They".
I am not sure if you were trying to make Luna ironic or not, but "never fails to disappoint" means "always disappoints".
This reminds me of that scene from Malcolm in the Middle where Lois realizes that Hal loves her more than she loves him. Hal has known for years he loves Lois more an she loves him and is okay with it because if she did love him as much as he loves her, they would never leave the bedroom. Celestia is Hal, of course.
"Idle". Or was it a very poetic caress?
I thought they were called Thestrals...
I am glad to see this. I had no idea that this came out. I only found out about it a few days ago when I suggested to someone to read the Who Rules? saga. Just think, if I was not trying to get other people to read your stuff, I never would have found this. I am happy I did. Unfortunately, I am not sure when I will be able to get to the next two chapters. I know if I cannot get to the next chapter later tonight, I will not be able to get to it until at least Tuesday. However, I will get to it eventually.
Here is looking forward to further adventures.
~KBO.
The s is unneeded.
The third to first person thing is still a little jarring.
I have seen enough hentai to know where this is going.
Poor girl is so depressed she tried to find solace at the bottom of several bottles.
You go into present tense here.
Missing e.
"Twice" should be "two" and this sentence did not get its period, so it may be pregnant. (I will make that joke, whenever applicable, until the day I die.)
6617259 I am sad to see that this series is ending, but happy to know that this is not the last book. One more story to look forward to! Yay!
Here is to hoping that that is a thing that happens!
I look forward to the part where Selene meets Cadance and Chrysalis.
~KBO.
6957491 As always, I appreciate you finding and commenting on all that! As soon as I get a chance, I will get in and clean those up!
...though I'll keep Trixie's speech pattern the way it is. I like it that way. Sorry.
Perhaps you meant "wretched"? Unless Cadance is calling Chrysalis vomit.
There is that Lois and Hal feeling I had from the first chapter again. This time with Shining Armor as Hal and Cadance as Lois.
I have a feeling that excessive whining is not going to get you out of this situation.
These paragraphs are too close to one another.
"Wandered".
Missing e.
I wonder if Cadance is going to find out Selene is her mother before or after she has sex with her. Before may be funnier, and sexier if they go through with it anyway. (What the hell am I saying?)
I am finally caught up. That is the good news. The bad news is that now I have to wait patiently and indefinitely for the next chapter. I am sure it will be worth the wait. Genius cannot be rushed.
~KBO.
Is this story dead?
7433198 I fear so
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Will it ever continue? If not... could I at least please know why?
8126269 I don't like to think of it as dead. Believe it or not, I think about finishing this up all the time. It's just that real life has become so busy for me that finding time to do this has become a challenge. I won't promises. I've already broken two of them about this story coming out on a particular schedule, but honestly, I just gotta get Rarity out of that cage. And get Chrysalis and Cadance back in order. And have an adventure with Luna and Tisiphone. So...yeah, I want to finish this. Honest.
Sorry for being a lazy bum.
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It's alright, I get the feeling all the time. Instead, I don't get to things at all. At least you got something going... that's worth something, right?
Good luck, I'll be waiting! Arrivederci and ciao my huzzzzaowwww!
aww is this story dead? who rules has to be one of the best fanfiction series I've ever read on this site. id love to see this get a continuation, if possible.
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Just came back to Fimfiction after like two years and noticed this series in my tracking section and suddenly remembered everything... And now the sadness has been doubled.
This is the WORST. POSSIBLE. THING.
Must admit I'm sad this was never finished, it did leave a bad taste in my mouth at times, but the overall journey was great. Thanks for the story.
It's been quite a ride and it saddens me it ends before reaching its destination. I've quite enjoyed all the interactions and dialogues between princesses and other characters (mainly princesses). I have confidence I would have continued to enjoy your story, if it were to be resumed.
I'm not good with words and turning them into detailed review this saga deserves, so let me simply thank you for writing those thousands words that make a story I came to love. :)