Celestia has plans for Twilight to bring her to her utmost peak of power. The test in mind has been discussed between the two Princesses, being the best course of action.
((Apologies, everyone that read this story, and everyone that reads this story in the future. I had to remove the music links from the story. The youtube links I provided, and only the ones I used, went private; for a reason unknown to me other than my sudden and random use of them. I apologize to the music developers, and everyone else.))
Chapters (2)
Idea for writing this came the first time I saw this picture, and that was a while ago. Idea's just been sitting in my head and getting better and better until I finally decided to write this. Also, an epic animation going through my head while writing/reading this sure did help.
Let me know what you all think of this story!
P.S: Not sure about the tags, but I thought they fit.
Interesting idea. I think it was a bit too rushed and both Twilight and the Princess didn't show enough emotion. It was pretty nice writing, and some manly feels were had.
More fics need recommended music. It just adds to the mood.
I don't have any glaring issues with this fic. Maybe show what the characters are feeling a bit more, but that's all.
Keep go, bro.
1743340 dafuq do you mean "COMPLETE"?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
1744157 kinda agree. While I can see it ending like this it leaves a literal shit ton to expand on. How does luna take it, how does her friends and spike, What of Caterlot's royalty will they accept her, What happended because of her power. Is she long living like Celestia or did Celestia Die for twilight to die in like 100 or 200 years. So many questions that can be expanded on.
The cover is what drew me in... and the story... reading this while sleep deprived really woke me up.
I saw the cover and thought "i'll give it a read". I loved this story. The music helped. And it was well written. Good job.
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You both have great points, and I was just lying in bed after waking up, and decided that I'd say:
"I suppose I did say that this was complete.. but I have way too many thoughts after what I've written here to just end it like that. ONWARD TO WRITING THE SECOND AND LAST CHAPTER!"
Hopefully, I can get this chapter as epic as the last. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire
Second chapter?!?!?!
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you had me scared there for a second. I thought this was the full and complete chapter, let see how much better you made it. Post when you update. Blog it.
Whew!!
1746868 differ to previous post.
1746917 Will do. Thanks for understanding my mistake.
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It happens to the best of us. Human errors and all.
Well, thanks for shedding some lift that this will continue, I didn't get a chance to read it though... So... Yay?
Epic story mah bro! I really found the story a hundred times better with the music. and the "Thumping" one made me cringe in fear.
Even if it wasn't suppose to happen, I liked the chapter
1747455 Updated and improved version up now!
New chapter out?
1747461 If I am not mistaken, that is one of the best comments I've ever gotten.
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YUP....MY REACTION EXACTLY!!!
1747515 LOL, I didn't even see you had commented on this story!
1746868 Tis better but I think you can still stretch the story....if you want
EPIC chapter thou
YESSSSSSSSSSSS! SO AWESOME!
Much better, much much better!
Sad Twilight is sad!
Anyways, great improvement and I must say the ending didn't leave much in wanting for some reason, sure you could follow up there's potential for future stories here, but this left off on a good note nonetheless.
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Your comments made my day sir, thank you!
DID I BEAT REGIDAR!!!
Sweet Celestia, how!?
1763070 Regidar doesn't look at stories from unknown authors that don't make it to the featured box.
My feels... they hurt...
1771333 Crying Achievement Unlocked
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I must say, this is one of the better of stories I have read. You gained a like and fav
The feels hurt so bad
Little typo.
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Is there a sequel?