awsome, cant you make one where Celestia wisits Lily like a week after she opens "Maggie´s"

>>757617757617

I'll put it on my list. Thanks for the request!

>>757633757633    yay :)

Derpy, possibly? I'd ask that it's a M/F clop instead of a F/F like this one.

Just a request, accept or deny, I'm putting it out there.

>>757778757778

Will do, it's on the list.

There is, unforuntately, quite a long list of requests ahead of you. But I rather expected this, so, yeah :P

>>757789757789 Meh, with great power comes great responsibility.

And clopping.

god! i Demand MOER!!!!

>>759418759418

I begin work on request one of four tonight at work. It's an OC, so we'll just see how it goes >.>

After that, though, it's Derpy and Celestia. Then another OC. That I'm surprisingly excited about writing.

Yeah.

Enjoy.

(*Thank you Kind Sir for your information on this :) HAVE NICE DAY!

Impressive as always, though the lack of what you needed going into it could be felt.  It was definitely short, but the most romantic encounters certainly are sometimes.

It was a very sweet story, and with what you had to go on, you certainly made it sweeter over creepy, given Daniel's request.  

>>761288761288

I intend for these chapters to be very short and to-the-point. More of my indulgent clop-fest than focusing on any story of any sort. No, I'm afraid Lily's story has drawn to and end. All that's left are the tales of all the *ahem* tail she's going to net.

awsome storie, easy a A rank

AWWWWW YYYYYEEEEAAAA

thanks for using my tip XD

Dude...That was AWESOME...

Seriously...That was perfect

"Nothing super hardcore, but I do have my girlfriend to thank for turning me on to it."

your girlfriend?

this was actually quite emotional and in a good way mind you

to be able to see your dead love again.... i'm guessing by the burn on his shoulder she died in a fire?

great chapter btw, love this request thing your doing!

Three way with Twilight and Fluttershy. All the way.

That's all I care about.

I couldn't see any mistakes in this fic, maybe your just a great writer

and sucks man. i know the feel of 14 hour shifts. it is hell

>>763272763272

Indeed. My girlfriend. I have one. And she's into that stuff. She told me to check out kink.com

So I did.

And I love her all the more for it.

>>764080764080

Lily male, female or otherwise?

>>766254766254

Female sounds good to me

Since, you’ve asked for requests here’s a rather unusual one, but the idea sounded pretty good in my head, so I decided to share it: Ben (Maggie’s ex) pays the brothel a visit. Maybe he heard that the place has a pretty good reputation and decided to check it out, not knowing that the name isn’t just a coincidence

(“Maggie, eh? I once knew a girl with that name, probably already death. So about your services…”

You probably can see why I called it an unusual request:  Ben’s chances of having sex are slower than the survival rate of snowballs in hell.  

It’s a bit difficult to talk about the story, since there’s no on-going plot. It’s just a collection of one-shoots about Lily and her customers having sex.  On the one hand I’ll miss the one-going storyline on the other hand it seems to be like you’re trying to give the characters more deep. At least that’s what I got from the interactions between Lily and her customers. Maybe it’s due to the fact the she no longer hides her true self.

Especially the second chapter with the OC was somewhat different from the rest. It had an unusual amount of romantic and sadness. Don’t get me wrong but usually it’s just about Lily having some fun with someone. But here we have a guy who asked Lily to take the shape of his death wife and then they’re dancing I certainly didn’t expect that.

The Celestia chapter was a strong contrast to the above one. Maybe it’s just me but there’s something funny about the idea that the ruler of Equestria wants to be dominated.  As for her character: I think you did a good job with her portrayal. Although, now I want to know why she felt the need to introduce Twilight o hard-core bondage.  I don’t strikes me as the kind of thing she would teach her on a whim.

Not much to say about the Luna chapter. It was good, I like the sex scene and I didn’t found anything to complain about.

>>768949768949

I like the idea of your request, but, well...

-= MASSIVE SPOILER ALERT =-

I was planning on writing Maggie's story separately, as I have stated earlier, and there was something rather important I was planning.

Ben actually died of an overdose a few years before the events of A Different Kind of Love and was the catalyst for Maggie's move to Ponyville.

On another note:

Many of the characters are circumstantially the way they are. Celestia almost certainly isn't the type of woman to be dominated, and wouldn't introduce her star pupil to bondage (though if you picked up on it, this was Celestia's first anal experience) at all. The characters are the way they are to make the story interesting for myself, and therefore easier to write. Nowhere in canon or fanon do many of the characteristics I base my interpretation of Hasbro's characters even exist. It's almost purely circumstantial, and only because it helps me write more in depth.

As usual, I value your advice greatly. Thank you for the read, Yonasomun. I hope you enjoyed

>>768553768553

I'll put it on the list.

can you do a big mac()XLilys chapter? oh and your doing a good job keep up the good work

Please write a LillyxAloexLotus chapter. I've been dying to hear about it since you metioned flexable.

>>780066780066

That's some original content I planned on writing as soon as I founded A Different Kind of Love: The Lost Chatpers. It will be included sometime in the future, possibly inbetween requests. Which I have a ton of, surprisingly. I'll start fitting them inbetween requests soon enough ^.^ I've been dying to write that chapter.

this was pretty good have a cupcake

Derpy is your least favorite!?!

Could I request a chapter with Vinyl and Octavia. If you write that i will give you all the moustaches.

>>786329786329

Afraid so. Only because EVERYONE In fanon portrays her as a stupid, scatterbrained idiot, and get offended when she's called mentally retarded or some other disability. I think of her more as a klutzy, spacey girl, not the kind to just mess up and say "Derp" or "I'm retarded." I think of her more along the lines of Yui Hirasawa from K-ON than as many people in fanon portray her. Needless to say, not a huge fan of Derpy. I'm sorry?

>>786618786618

As much as I could care less about mustaches, I shall put your request on the list. Would you like Lily to portray herself as Vinyl or Octavia?

>>787381787381 hmm, so hard to choose,I know, BOTH!. Vinyl is the crazy one, so she drags Octavia to maggie's for a bit of "fun"

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>>788046788046

So... You want a threesome with Vinyl, Octavia, and Lily...?

Or would you just like me to write an independent ship with Octavia and Vinyl?

>>788066788066

threesome! lesbian threesome is best threesome! (you sir are getting watched!)

>>788101788101

*Sigh*

I'll put it on the list.

>>788119788119

if you don't want to write it at all or you want to do something different, please feel free. So far, I've liked everything you put up and anything you write under duress won't be as good.

(I'm sorry to say the Derpy chapter is not your best work, still good though)

>>788165788165

Heh. As stated previously, I'm not a fan of Derpy. I'm surprised at the length of the chapter, and indeed, all my work as of late. I have much time to get around to your request, I'm sure I'll think of something. I would recommend being more specific in the future, however... As with "Midnight Waltz," I take quite a bit creative license when confronted with an unspecific request. Still, Vinyl/Tavi isn't my favorite pairing, but it's up there. I'm sure I'll come up with something ^.^

in that case pretend I never asked

>>788269788269

Uum... Ok?

cudos to you for not using the "OH eat my muffin!" line when they were doing the sex. i liked it

>>790124790124

I'm doing the final proofread and edit on your chapter now. Keep an eye peeled in the next ten minutes or so ^.^

>>790172790172

haven read it yet, but huge

Hmm, interesting read.

this clop was absoultly perfect! the kind of thing of which i dreamed since i was small....

lily had to go save the day

by getting conquest laid

and in the end she had enjoyed it more than she thought!

Ohhh i likey!

I've never heard of Dark Conquest before, so you got him perfectly as far as I'm concerned

though really, sounds like a neat character, and this was a good chapter.

This is my first time commenting on your story so I should add here that I really like it, and there are only two clopfics I'm okay with (though I'm not sure this counts as clop...), so hat's off to you good sir.

I haven't read all the comments, so I'm not sure if this has been asked for already, but I think you should have Lily and Twilight have another go at it. You seemed to be kinda hinting at it in Twilight's chapter anyway, so I think it would fit. This is less of a request, and more of a suggestion. Also, more of the best pony makes stories better.

And finally, I'm not asking for a Lyra chapter, but if you ever do one please throw in something along the lines of "Lily had never been with someone this good with their hands"

>>795468795468

As a matter of fact, I have two chapters with Twilight on my request list. You can view the list on my blog entry. I've yet to recieve a Lyra request, so I shall add that. I suspect it will be a week or two before I get around to it.

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it

How did I take so long to realize you had finished my request?! (one day, but still)

Anyways, I think it's cool that you did this despite the fact that you said it was something difficult for you as Derpy wasn't necessarily one of your favorites. I enjoyed this chapter anyway, especially the ending. You always seem to find nice little endings that make me smile or chuckle a bit, just because they're really light-hearted and cheery.

Thanks again! OwO

>>796244796244

I'm sorry! I normally send a PM out when I finish a request >.< Still, glad you liked it ^.^

>>795496795496

Oops, that wasn't meant as a request, sorry about not being clear. You don't have to write that if you don't want to, in fact, I would feel bad about other people having to wait for their actual request just because I didn't think through my comment, it was just meant as a bad joke.

So yeah, sorry about that

Besides, I would feel bad about requesting more than one thing, and I was planning on requesting something later.

>>795468795468

he's from my story, For the ones we love

loyal2-1 got him pretty much on the money, minus a few quirks here and there.... but this was still what he would have done in this situation.

check it out if your interested in him

>>798982798982

I just added it to my fanfic list, thanks for that.

I've got a lot of free time next week, glad that I'll have something interesting to read.

>>799307799307

no problem! hope you enjoy it!

>>799307799307 Thanks to both of you for the reads ^.^ Iroh, Lyra's chapter has already been added to the list. But feel welcome to request more than one. I may prioritize and put you behind other requests, but feel free to make them anyways. I'm just struggling to finish Octavia's chapter right now T-T

>>799438799438 Really? I thought I messed him up bad >.> Still, glad to hear I got him down. XD

>>799801799801

Weeeeeeeellllllll if you want me to be super nit-picky i could be.........

>>799835799835

Well when I said "Bad" I meant like "Holy fuck, you ass, why would I ever let you write about my OC? Fuck you and this story, you suck, toodaloo." I'm just glad you liked it is all >.<

>>799844799844

jesus man! even if you did screw im up (Which you didn't) i'd probably just give you a little review. this was the greatest thing to happen to conquest since chrysalis!

>>799863799863

Then we all good

C

"Bravissimo" indeed.

Octavia is one of my favorite characters, and i appreciate how she was portrayed, but as with any story with Octavia in it, I wish I had more of her interacting with the world.

This story was done WAY better than i thought it would have been done and nice touch with the little fight and run away scene.

Good action and good (though short) clop.

I know it's required for the sake of chapters not being insanely long, but it seems like girls in this world are way too easy to get into bed, but you know what, I'm fine with it.

The musical jokes were the high point for this chapter for me, just great.

I, sir, am dissapointed. You seem to forget things Lilly almost said about them, and didn't place them here. This clearly isn't your best.

>>813387813387

As stated in the Author's Notes, I most certainly am not proud of this work. I very well may un-publish it and do an overhaul. In fact, I think I will. It's too short, I need to re-read what I wrote about them (Flexibility. Duh. damn it.) and add some body.

I'm sorry you had to read that. I'm sorry ANYone had to read that.

>>813396813396

That's okay. You should read some of my works. Compared to some of mine, this was one of Celestia's golden rays!

>>813463813463

You really shouldn't put yourself down like that. I'll take a gander, probably put your work on my ever-growing "Read Later" List (Twelve long and counting) and never get around to it.

Hey, would you rather I lie and say I'd ready it >.>

>>813524813524

You could but the only stories I've written are on Fanfiction.net (no mlp yet). The ones I talked about are Spartan in Alegesia ( a HaloxEragon crossover) and The Ultimate Threat ( a RVB fic).

Man, I saw Twilight was involved and was hoping for.. y'know. Bondage.

Am I disappointed?

Note even kinda.

(just saw yer last note: so... c-c-c-c-ombo breaker!)

>>819264819264

You...

You bastard...

Check my blog, Twilight BDSM chapter coming soon. I will say this much about it: Public orgasm denial.

>>819284819284

And in the next chapter, it better reveal who Rarity is engaged to!

Damn, I wasn't exactly sure where you would go with my suggestion- but this was certainly better then my expectations. Wow.

not proud of this? THIS WAS SO BUCKIN' HAWT!!!!

Have a flutterbutt

Image: http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6ak7q9mcY1r9m6s0o1_1280.jpg

sure, its not your best work, but its nothing to feel bad about.

on a note of curiosity, where do you work that you are allowed to write clop? I'm not asking for specifics, just the type of company.

>>822908822908

Private security. My job entails watching security cameras. Just glancing to the side, I can cover every camera. That, and blind typing works. Essentially, watching cameras while I type.

You were looking for your loyal, honest fanbase? Hello there! Actually, one person can't be a fanbase, so never mind about that

This is the first chapter of this sequel that I thought was long enough, the rest felt a little short. But I'm not going to complain about something that is free and that you are doing out of the goodness of your own heart, because you are obviously a very generous person to go through all this effort to write for us. But not only do you write, you deliver what I can only describe as the best clopfic, and actually, one of the best fanfics that I have ever read.My heart flutters whenever I see that this has updated, and I find that I am unable to do anything but hang on your every word from start to finish, usually re-reading just to feel the same way again. (Stroking your ego is fun, though I do mean what I said. Well, actually the last part went a bit too far and might have been made up...)

I had a question about this chapter though, were some parts of it meant to be funny, or do I just have a strange sense of humor?

But yeah, damn good chapter. I like the little bits of story/character development/miscellaneous tidbits about Lily's life in the beginning of chapters, and this one was the best of those.

Finally, I would like to request that the next chapter be one word, actually, name: Rarity's fiance

>>823165823165

Wait until a few chapters from now. I have a VERY interesting idea for Rarity's Fiance. And thank you very much for the words of encouragement, I rather needed them.

NIce one!

You know something, I've read all stories with Lily and I've noticed that Lily never has sex in her 'Original" form, her changeling form. She's always in a different form. In fact, I doubt if she's ever with her clients in that form. She probably has a form to meet and do business with her clientele, but never in the changeling form. I can understand if its due to business, but it seems that most already know that Lily's a changeling. Is she ashamed about her changeling self?

>>824359824359

You bring up a very interesting point, actually. Here's my justification for this, and it's hinted VERY subtly in separate chapters.

There are hardly any changelings who appear in their natural form. In fact, changlings in their natural form are rather ugly and unappealing. I believe the line was from Chapter 2 of "A Different Kind of Love" and it reads something to the effect of: "All changelings have a form they take naturally when they want to relax, a form that's comfortable to them."

In addition, I've established that humanized changelings are genderless, though they do tend to lean to one side or another. Lily can and has transformed into a male, however. It's just that Changelings themselves reproduce in an asexual manner. Sex to them is purely for fun, and only happens in a humanized form. It's not that Lily's ashamed of being a changeling, it's that appearing as one is unappealing and somewhat frightening. She sticks to human forms, and indeed sees no need to transform into her changeling form.

If you haven't, go read "A Different Kind of Love" it's the precursor to The Lost Chapters, and it may shed some light on your question if I have not.

p.s. Thank you for your request, by the way. I'm looking forward to writing it very much, and indeed, it's going to bring together a very important turning point for the series. Well, not a turning point, but a good chapter nevertheless.

>>824384824384

Ah, I didn't know they were genderless in their changeling form. Yeah, I can see how that would be a hinderance. Thanks for clearing that up

>>824384824384

Couldn't a changling give themselves a gender...?

>>824499824499

I suppose they could, but changelings naturally reproduce asexually. Not sure how, but they do. If a changeling gives themselves a gender, they're sort of just changing into a human (Or pony. Human in my story, pony pretty much everywhere else. :P)

I wouldn't put it outside the realm of possiblity, but seeing a changeling in their natural form with genetalia would be extremely rare, to the point of impossibility. Sex, to changelings, is purely for enjoyment. It serves no purpose. Not childbirth, not emotional connections, nothing. Which is why Lily is so loose. And why she's unconcerned with internal orgasms. In human form, changelings are sterile.

>>824507824507

M'just sayin, someone's gotta wanna try it with her

>>824507824507

I fully and emphatically support freaky changeling sex.

also big whoop from the other half of your fanbase, I was here for the first story and I 'm still here now.

This was buckin awesome!

I can't wait for the chapter on raritys fiancé.

I don't know what your talking about. That was very well done. I find OC's to be wonderful creatures, because there isn't a right or wrong way for them to act because they "don't exist." I might even give you my OC to work with, just to see what you come up with.

>>826947826947

I actually rather enjoyed the 2 OC's I wrote chapters for. I'll put it on the list iffen you want. As with all OC's, though, I ask for a picture or at least a description of sorts.

>>822932822932

That makes sense, I had a mental image of some guy in a cubicle who is supposed to be filling out tax forms or something, but instead is writing clop. I loved that mental image, and you just ruined it.

LMFAO and Squee'd

Yes, that...yes!

Ending it right there was just cruel. I really hope that a continuation of that scene will be written soon. In fact, can I request that that be continued?

Anyway, I love the actual story in this. Celestia's dealing with the newspaper and public announcement was just great. One problem I have with a bunch of fanfics is that they neglect Twilight's power when needed to advance the plot. Realistically, 6 guards is nowhere near enough to overpower Twi, she should have been able to just teleport them away or something. But that may be just my headcannon

jesus christ a truckload?!?!

>>837342837342

I agree! we need taht next scene.

DON'T HOLD OUT ON ME!!!!!

>>837342837342

Twilight had been hiking through the countryside and had almost certainly been exhausted infiltrating Canterlot serreptitiously. In addition, those cuffs were supposed to be specifically designed to lock away magical power. I forgot to mention that. I may put that in later.

In short, much like Celestia and Chrysalis, a lot of different things had to have come together for Twilight to be overpowered. I should have been more specific.

Holy shit, that was AMAZING.  

So what crime did Twilight actually commit to have a warrant out for her arrest?  That was bugging me through the whole chapter.

>>839245839245

When the Royal Canterlotian Guard conducts an investigation, they damn well expect parties they need to investigate to be in their homes and willing to cooperate.

So, wait...

The Royal Guard was investigating Princess Celestia- THEIR GOD EMPRESS, WHO CONTROLS THEM COMPLETELY AND HAS RULED FOR MILLENNIUMS, FOR A SEX SCANDAL? What? Also, did I miss why Twilight was being charged? Why was she going to be arrested? Was it because of the SEX SCANDAL? HOW DOES THAT MAKE SENSE?

Just... so confused.