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this was pretty good have a cupcake
Derpy is your least favorite!?!
Could I request a chapter with Vinyl and Octavia. If you write that i will give you all the moustaches.
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Afraid so. Only because EVERYONE In fanon portrays her as a stupid, scatterbrained idiot, and get offended when she's called mentally retarded or some other disability. I think of her more as a klutzy, spacey girl, not the kind to just mess up and say "Derp" or "I'm retarded." I think of her more along the lines of Yui Hirasawa from K-ON than as many people in fanon portray her. Needless to say, not a huge fan of Derpy. I'm sorry?
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As much as I could care less about mustaches, I shall put your request on the list. Would you like Lily to portray herself as Vinyl or Octavia?
787381 hmm, so hard to choose,I know, BOTH!. Vinyl is the crazy one, so she drags Octavia to maggie's for a bit of "fun"
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So... You want a threesome with Vinyl, Octavia, and Lily...?
Or would you just like me to write an independent ship with Octavia and Vinyl?
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threesome! lesbian threesome is best threesome! (you sir are getting watched!)
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*Sigh*
I'll put it on the list.
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if you don't want to write it at all or you want to do something different, please feel free. So far, I've liked everything you put up and anything you write under duress won't be as good.
(I'm sorry to say the Derpy chapter is not your best work, still good though)
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Heh. As stated previously, I'm not a fan of Derpy. I'm surprised at the length of the chapter, and indeed, all my work as of late. I have much time to get around to your request, I'm sure I'll think of something. I would recommend being more specific in the future, however... As with "Midnight Waltz," I take quite a bit creative license when confronted with an unspecific request. Still, Vinyl/Tavi isn't my favorite pairing, but it's up there. I'm sure I'll come up with something ^.^
in that case pretend I never asked
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Uum... Ok?
cudos to you for not using the "OH eat my muffin!" line when they were doing the sex. i liked it
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I'm doing the final proofread and edit on your chapter now. Keep an eye peeled in the next ten minutes or so ^.^
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Ohhh i likey!
How did I take so long to realize you had finished my request?! (one day, but still)
Anyways, I think it's cool that you did this despite the fact that you said it was something difficult for you as Derpy wasn't necessarily one of your favorites. I enjoyed this chapter anyway, especially the ending. You always seem to find nice little endings that make me smile or chuckle a bit, just because they're really light-hearted and cheery.
Thanks again! OwO
*Looks at the very long list of chapter* Oh boy, I’ve a lot to catch up.
That’s the first time in the story that a male prostitute is mentioned, just as I was about to point out the total lack of them. After all, shouldn’t a popular place like this have at least a few male employees? Especially since Equestria is a female dominated country?
So Derpy’s real name in this story is Diane, which is also Pinkie’s middle name? Did you do that on purpose or is it just a coincidence?
Overall it was a good chapter and I like how you portrayed Derpy. So far you’ve done a good job writing characters that aren’t you’re favorites. The build-u p that leads to the sex was well-done, too. Only the part about her crashing into things because she didn’t got laid sounds a bit odd.
Also I share your opinion about Derpy begin a Klutz instead of a “mentally retarded”. But I was under the impression that most people In the Fanon share this opinion and only a minority thinks that she’s mentally handicapped.
How in the world can you not like derpy?
This chapter had such a good opportunity to include spanking. Diane must get punished for the 'damages', one way or another