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Very good, but 's last name is Lulamoon.
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>.< Shhhh... Creative license. Shhhh >.<
Is that Canon or no?
1155033 Yes that name is cannon as of the royal wedding episode.
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Damn.
Well I like it as is.
Gonna be a cranky bastard on this one.
wow nice one ... to bad Lily didn't shifted into one of her male forms ...
nice done Loyal, the storypart was very good.
Lily was drunk.
best opening ever!
I have a problem with this. This problem covers the majority of fanfics that involve Trixie. The point is, she is not powerful... at all, above average at best, certainly not good enough to be Luna's student. The whole point of Trixie's character from her episode was that she was all talk, had no power to back up her words and just played tricks on people. The end of that episode ls showed that she only had about four or five tricks. She's a show pony, all "razzle-dazzle," all bark, no bite, whatever you want to call it, Trixie is not some great caster/brilliant student/competent magi... she just isn't, to say she is is wrong.
Sorry if that was a bit mean, but I'm just disappointed that you did that, I expected better from you. I've seen too many fanfic writers do that, and to have one of my favorite writers do it too, it just... well, I'm upset about it.
Other than that gigantic flaw, I thought this chapter was a good read, especially the questioning part, I always like when Lily is being witty.
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While there is truth in what you say, I've always pictured Trixie as being good at a different KIND of magic. Conjuration and illusions, as opposed to "Hard" Magic like levitation or difficult spells. In addition, much time has passed since "Boast Busters" and this chapter. Trixie has had plenty of time to develop into a powerful, or at least competent magi.
^^^ My reasoning.
I can't say that I liked this chapter as much as some of your other work, but it certainly isn't the worst of the bunch. It just didn't do anything for me, and I really don't know why. That being said, the portions where Lily was working to get under Trixie's skin and Lily getting drunk drunk off her ass were quite amusing. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Although I originally asked for a M/F Trixie chapter I still wasn't disappointed. A good read was had
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Shit, I'm sorry >.< I accidentally omitted details like that from the updated list. I apologize.
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No problem
As I said: I still had a great time reading the chapter so no need to apologize
1158514 she and twilight went to school together. it's canon.
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Are you sure? I don't remember that.
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I got another red thrumb.
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those cts
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How dare they. Don't worry, I'll hunt this bastard down.
Hi Loyal, I wanted to know if you were still taking requests. If so, could i request either fluttershy x big Mac x lily or cheerilee x big Mac x lily? Whichever you're more comfortable writing.
I love this story, it is awesome!
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Big Mac/Lily/Cheerliee happened. Check the chapters "Feelings are for..."
Glad you enjoyed the story ^.^
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THEN I GOT A GREEN THUMB! ALL IS RIGHT WITH THE WORLD!
1173445 how the buck do you only have 75 likes?
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Not enough readers. *Shrug* I got a lot more than I could ever have wanted from the start, so I'm not complaining. ADKoL has like, 109.