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Rainbow Dash finally convinced Rarity to come on a camping trip with her and Applejack. But the whole situation seems a little... fluffy.

My inspiration/The artwork.

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PRAISE OLD SPICE
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Black jesus

"I wrote this to prove once and for all that I cannot do comedy."

Mission success. Return to base, Red One.

That was good. Very good. Almost a real episode, if not for the slightly crude humor. I'm now going to read levitation.

I thought this was actually pretty funny :rainbowlaugh:
A tad rushed towards the end, but it had some laugh out loud moments.

I actually liked this one. bravo good sir.

THIS IS EXTREAMLY SILLY

The dialogue was exceptionally silly, to the point where I was expecting a Royal Guard to walk on stage and terminate the fic on account of silliness.

But it was at least amusing to read.

So, how did Rarity become un-marshmellowed?

So, what happened there at the end? Rainbow Dash never applied the cure for poison joke, so how did Rarity stop being a marshmallow?

765624 764968Well I said she dropped the vial, so I really just tried to imply that Rarity got splashed.

I like it, agree with other people's confusion at the end though

and Zecora FTW
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....banana

I never get tired of reading comedy stories with poison joke as a main focus.

LOL! rarity deserved to be to be a marshmellow.

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