Rainbow Dash finally convinced Rarity to come on a camping trip with her and Applejack. But the whole situation seems a little... fluffy.
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PRAISE OLD SPICE
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Black jesus
"I wrote this to prove once and for all that I cannot do comedy."
Mission success. Return to base, Red One.
This is purty good
That was good. Very good. Almost a real episode, if not for the slightly crude humor. I'm now going to read levitation.
I thought this was actually pretty funny
A tad rushed towards the end, but it had some laugh out loud moments.
I actually liked this one. bravo good sir.
THIS IS EXTREAMLY SILLY
The dialogue was exceptionally silly, to the point where I was expecting a Royal Guard to walk on stage and terminate the fic on account of silliness.
But it was at least amusing to read.
So, how did Rarity become un-marshmellowed?
So, what happened there at the end? Rainbow Dash never applied the cure for poison joke, so how did Rarity stop being a marshmallow?
765624 764968Well I said she dropped the vial, so I really just tried to imply that Rarity got splashed.
I like it, agree with other people's confusion at the end though
and Zecora FTW
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....banana
764361 I CONCAVE.
I never get tired of reading comedy stories with poison joke as a main focus.
LOL! rarity deserved to be to be a marshmellow.