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I may not be a great writer,

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"You're fired."
Well, great. Rainbow Bucking Awesome Danger Dash no longer has a job. Now what?
You can probably guess exactly what.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 27 )

This is... pretty good actually, keep it up!

Huh....this is not what i was expecting...not sure if thats a good or bad thing...

You have piqued my attention. I ask good author to please make haste for I look forward to reading more.
-DD
:heart:

I just logged on to see that this was automatically put in my favorites. Wtf?! :rainbowderp:

4123817 Maybe it's a sign! :pinkiegasp:
Well, sorry about that, anyway.

This is amusing so far and definitely deserves my up vote and fave. I'll be waiting for more :pinkiehappy:

Actually, both flour and corn starch are flammable to the point of explosiveness when they are suspended in the air. Fun fact, you can use corn starch as a safer alternative for firebreathing. I assume you can use flour too, but I've seen it done with starch.

4123824 Youuuuu making more, orrrrrr wat

4260263 I've actually been working on it for the past few hours. New chapter... probably tomorrow, perhaps tonight if I can stop getting distracted. :moustache:

No, you're not. This is good...it is...interesting...:moustache:

4261189 Eh, thanks. Sometimes I just feel like my style is too technical and mechanical to write this kind of thing. :applejackconfused:

4261218 Dude, I go way into detail when I describe parkour. You're not alone.

4261218
YOU HAD MY AMUSEMENT
But now you have a follower :derpytongue2:

what in the hay was Rarity doing here?!

Well, she got backstage without any issues. I'm guessing she works there.
Stripper Rarity or Waitress Rarity?:unsuresweetie:
Or better yet....She's "friendly" enough with the other strippers to be allowed back stage.:moustache:

Rainbow slapped a silk-swathed hoof over her face with a groan

...didn't you say she took her socks off?...why would her hoof be 'silk-swathed'?

4264146 :facehoof: Uhhg, you're right. I wrote the chapter all out-of-order, and I ended up writing the actual stripping-off part last. Thanks for pointing it out.

I can just picture the look on Rarity's face... PRICELESS! Oh dear, please tell me I can expect more of this.

4292408 Perhaps someday. I actually wasn't planning on it. :applejackunsure:
maybe some raridash clop if i ever learn how to write it

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If you do decide to write more to this and need help, you can drop me a line if you want.:pinkiehappy:

Genius!
Weeh luv u cirrus :heart:

There is only one problem with this magnficence. TOO SHORT :duck:

Oh my :twilightoops: Rainbow how bold. This story was short, but still fun. Nice work.

The cover art has broken legs.

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