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"No matter how many friends you do lose...you can always make more." - Michael J. Caboose

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Celestia had been looking for the one who would wield 'The Key'. For years she had tried to find the one who would open the door to the light, the one that could save Equestria from darkness. What she found was Twilight Sparkle.

A mlpxKingdom Hearts crossover. This crossover is a mlp story that uses a lot of Kingdom Hearts elements.

Chapters (28)
Comments ( 135 )

Well, this'll be a fun adventure. Look forward to Super Key Horse Twilight Adventures updates.

7465026 Welp, I currently plan to have it be weekly updates. I only have a few chapters done, but most of them are 80 to 90 percent done. Hopefully I can keep going all the way!

Oh I can't wait to see what happens next to Twilight, so will the Keyblade she gets later look like the first one Sora gained?

7465082 Yes. I won't hide that fact. Twilight will get a Kingdom Key.

Twilight is gonna be a type of Sora in this story but still herself.

Interesting Twilight hatched a Moggel instead of a dragon. :rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy: Now this is definitely a good twist to things. So any plans on what name the Moggel will be? :rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::raritystarry::raritystarry:

7465198 It's a moogle. And the moogle is Spike in this story...and that'll be his name too.

7465226 Well...I already wrote a bunch of next few chapters and Spike's name is all over it.

7465211 Well I guess I should of seen that coming. :facehoof: But I have to ask why are you going with Spike, or Barb instead of a different name? :facehoof: Because several other stories I read used Spike/Barb for Twilight's assistant when he/she is a different race. Mind you I don't remember all of them so don't ask okay? Plus I rather forget about some of them. :pinkiecrazy:

7465226 Thank you for agreeing to a point I mention a bit ago. :raritystarry:

7465248 Okay...I was gonna explain some the rules of this story in the author's note of the second chapter but I'll tell you this. I plan on having Twilight meet several FF and Disney characters. That includes other moogles. I'm not going to go into detail but I don't... don't want to give the moogle a...moogle name. I'm trying very hard to not make any OCs in this story. I want all the characters to be either mlp or Disney or FF.

7465258 Okay sorry for the whole thing which I didn't know sense I'm not you. :trollestia::trollestia: Joking aside that idea seems good, but all I can say really if you wanted to how about having the Moggel have a different color scheme than the other Moggels. Also as a suggestion how about a Chao named Angel for Fluttershy instead of a rabbit/bunny that's slightly nicer, but still can be somewhat mean. :raritystarry::raritywink:

7465296 Its funny you say that cuz...I kinda have an idea with this moogle for later in terms of color. Let's just say...he'll have something later on that'll help him resemble who he is a bit more. As for now, he'll only be saying 'Kupo' since he's a baby.

7465305 So let guess a light purple fur, green for red besides the nose correct? :rainbowhuh::rainbowwild: Which as I mentioned before (in away) seance Spike is a Moggel shouldn't the other Mane6 have different animal companies after all it wouldn't seem right in my opinion. :twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:

7465328 Nope. It still looks like a moogle. Its something else that happens later. Just wait and find out...

Not bad at all again was vary intertaning to read. Also like I said on your wall post or what ever it's called it's good to see a story even if it is random, you make good stories even when I though I would not like this from the crossover bcause I did not know kingdom hearts but like all your other stories it stil was a joy to read. As always keep up the great awesome work.

It's actually a fun story to read. What you said in that blog isn't true. You are a pretty writer. Stay awesome.

7467662 just trying to support one of my fav authors. :twilightblush:

7468203 Thank you!:pinkiehappy:

I just said that in my blog because...it always happens when I start a new story. Then again, there are a few users on this site that don't like me so maybe that's why I get downvoted so quickly sometimes.

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Yeah... But there are always people who will be supporting you.
Anyways, stay awesome.

Welp, it's another chapter. I see some interesting things there.
(Though I never played the Kingdom Hearts, I'm beginning to get a clue what is going on with that game.)

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How... Different? Care to explain a little bit?:twilightsheepish:

7487117 Well...it has very depressing stories but it includes bright and colorful Disney characters and the main characters of Sora, Donald and Goofy (In that order. Its a running joke in the series) are complete goofballs who love to just laugh and have fun while horrible depressing stuff happens to the other main characters. It has a weird set of tones that the series goes through and this first arc will be set in the tone of the beginning of the first KH game.

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Well I kind of played the game for a while... On a simulator ofc. And... yeah it's a little bit of depressing but kinda okay to me. And pretty cool.
Anyways, stay awesome.

I like this Celestia, you write Celestia very well.
Little dissapointed Twilight has the Kingdom Key, rather than spellbinder or something.
This is still awesome, keep up the badassery.

7503230 Well...I had Twilight get that version because I felt it would help establish that Sora is not appearing in this story. Also, thanks. I'm known for writing a horrible Celestia, so thanks.

You have two dislikes and no comment saying how shit you are. Why do you always say people hate on you so much.

7504485 They don't usually use comments. They use the other tools of this site.

Oh you have got to be kidding me, Trixie of all ponies, I would have thought that Starlight Glimmer would have been WAY better to be the evil apprentice, but I do hope that Trixie is freed from whatever control that Evil Master of hers has on her.

7538319 Trixie is in the character tags my friend. She's going to play an important part in this story. Though I hope that this doesn't mean you'll dislike the story now...

7538434 Nope, not going to dislike the story, I love it so far and I can't wait to see what happens next, but I got to say please don't turn Trixie into a Heartless or a Nobody.

7538455 Okay, that isn't going to happen. That is not in the plans. Trixie'e role is...sorry, I don't want to spoil it.

Personally, I think there weren't enough minigames

7590229 Don't worry, there'll be plenty of yellow teddy bears in this story.:trollestia:

Interesting so far, I do hope that Trixie will join Twilight as a party member. In the cannon show they always have that funny banter between each other. :twilightsmile:

7648585 I'm glad you enjoy it. As for Trixie, I don't want to spoil anything.

You've done what I thought couldn't be done, make Pooh likable.
You wrote him just out of character enough to make him different from the actual one, but in character enough to make it weird. You hit the sweet spot

7649830 I wasn't intending to write him OOC...I guess I kinda did. I thought I didn't...at least based on the old movie style of him. (Not KH version)

That being said, if you want a story that makes Pooh likable and mlp, try this truly incredible story: Saying Goodbye

It's one of my favorite stories on this site and it's an amazing Winnie the Pooh/MLP story.

With Radiant Hope as Yen Sid, now my guess for who the Master is is Sombra, and the Servant is Starswirl's Nobody.

7683482 Someone's finally guessing! I'm curious, what makes you guess that?

Hmmm.... I wonder what role Trixie is gonna fullfill.

7684754 I feel she'll fill a Riku-Like role to mirror Twilight's Sora-Like role. Touched by Darkness, but seeking to return to the Light, with her gaining finally also a keyblade after many trials to find a balance between the Light and Darkness inside of her.

Well, if i'm not wrong, it could happen really differently, i'm waiting impatiently to see what you have in store for us, dear author. ^^

7700305 Why thank you. I hope to have another chapter out today.

Wow. But you're not an alicorn. How did you live that long?"

"That...is a story for another time." Radiant said as she rubbed her left front leg. "Why don't we get to your introductions?"

Is the Umbrum’s world going to be like the Realm of Darkness, which halts aging? This would also lend more credence to the theory that Sombra is the Master.

I might know who Radiant's adopted son is if only because I have plans for my own Kingdom Hearts story where Radiant Hope is a Keyblade wielder, and she has her own student: Sunburst.

I'm not sure who the colt and cat at the end are, though. Maybe the colt is Hope because of his boomerang?

7703395 No on the Umbrum part. I'm not putting that in the story. The time part is...something that will be explained later. As for your other questions, you'll find out later in this arc.

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