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canadianbrony91
Be who you are and do what you like. Those who mind won't matter and those who matter won't mind. ~Dr. Seuss~
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Haven't read yet, but Sweet Cthulhu, he lives!
7172668 I had the exact same thought when I saw this!
Well, now that I've read it, I can attest this is just as amazing as your other works, bro. Simultaneously, it makes me immensely hate being an empath, since the discovery bit has me practically infuriated and questioning my mental stability
Soarin better better not forgive Spitfire. Once a person cheats you can't trust them not too again. Spitfire was most likely fucking multiple other guys for quite a while anyway.
I've always loved your writing and you haven't failed to amaze me yet, spectacular work! Loved the detail you put into every scene, very immersive
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Thank ya kindly
perfect love it to death hope you make more stories like this 10/10
Currently working on chapter 3, will update as time goes on
Well just found out EQAD, what I ususally post all my stories at, got shut down for a second time and they're probably not gonna try to restore it.
Anyone else know of a site to post fanfictions on besides that one? I dont think EQD would since they're probably anti-adult content and such, but idk since I've never used it.
I don't believe Spitfire in the slightest. She's only saying she was sorry because she got caught, not because she actually is sorry.
Yet another marvelous chapter. Stiiiill kinda wanna punch Spits in the throat...
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OMG ARE YOU BLAMING THE VICTIM LIKE OMG LATER IM GOING TO MY SAFE SPACE BYE #TRIGGERED #OPPRESSED
Lol jk.
My sister was cheated on by her ex-husband. He was, is, a damn good man. People (ponies) make mistakes, you can't expect perfection from a mortal. What Soarin said, about Spitefire never lying to him in all the time he has known her really forces me to believe her story.
I really, really hope I'm wrong, and that Spitefire is just a harlot in this story, and not a blackmailed mare that was out of options. I'd rather have her be the villain of the tale than the heart broken pony that was forced to cheat.
Great story by the way, ten from Len, all that good rubbish.
Loving the story so far, shot you a PM.
This has gotten me more interested than well...any clopfic I've read before. I like this so far, think I'll stick with it for now
OH JESUS CHRIST I FEEL A HERD INCOMING IF I SEE ANOTHER FUCKIN HERD I'LL SHANK A BITCH
It's been a long time since I read one of your stories. I really like this one.
New chapter boiiii~
Also sorry it took so long
7814482 Shhhhhhhh. It's okay. It was worth the wait c:
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Another awesome chapter! Can't wait to see the next one! Totally worth the wait
huh so she and Rainbow are looking for Sorin...while he's having sexy time with Vinyl. Well that will be award but fun if they walk in on them. Now I have to wonder if they will leave them to it or join in, lol. Could be Spitfire's way of officially apologizing to him and making it up that is if only Vinyl is cool with it.
Incoming mini-rant:
Just wanted to say, for those of you who are still part of the fandom, I give a salute to you. So many creators I once admired are now either ashamed, embarrassed, or abandoned the fandom entirely and it really disappoints me to see what used to be such dedicated and passionate people reduced to self-deprecating apologetic husks of what they used to be. Especially those who inspired me to start writing in the first place. I don't care how old I am or what my job is or what responsibilities my future will hold. I'll always be a fan of mlp in one form or another. Regardless of my current position in life, I'll always remember mlp as an important journey that helped me mature and discover more about myself than anything else ever could. Most will say its because I'm a regressive child that doesn't want to grow up, but I say its because I value things in my lifetime that define me, no matter what they are or why they happened. Mlp taught me values about friendship that no other person or thing ever did before and it's helped me through several issues in life that I otherwise would've been clueless about.
If you want to leave the fandom, I have no issue with it. It's your right. That's not the point of this. But if you chose to leave and then turn around to demonize the same fandom that you were a part of and off-handedly bully those who helped support you, you're accomplishing nothing but betraying the trust and respect that others once had for you.
Stay strong fellas and gals. Don't let those who say they "grew out of it" discourage you from doing your own thing and celebrating the show in your own way, no matter how many more seasons there are and no matter how long the show itself will last. And most importantly, never ever tell yourself you're too old for anything.
"Be who you want and do what you want. Those who matter won't mind and those who mind won't matter." ~Dr. Seuss
Sry for the rant. Just had to let it out somewhere
Incoming threesome!
7829488 I just want you to know that I just got done reading each of the five chapters that you have posted about this story and it has fully inspired me to write my own Vinyl and Octavia story. I look very much forward to reading more wonderful chapters on this story and more of your work. I also look forward to seeing what else you come up with for such wonderful characters. Keep up the good work and always reach for the stars. This has been a wonderful story and truly is one of the best stories out there.
Hi there, sorry to bother you, but just thought you ought to know - I just saw this story listed on the main page, and your short description doesn't actually mention who the lead character is, it just says 'he.' Wondered if it might be better to change it to his name, as you're not at the 250 character limit for the short description, might possibly make it a bit clearer?
More soon?!
This just keeps getting and better. I think you and your fics have made me a vinyl scratch fan...you rock!
Very very nice. Want more feedback?
7843033 Huh... That's odd, idk why I left that part out. Thanks!
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7843809 Thankya! I do my best
7844321 of course! Feedback is always welcome, whether it be positive or constructive
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Okay, I'm really strapped for time right now, so I'll just tell you what really must be said.
1. I really like this story. It's a very well-done, realistic, adult take on well, adult relationships. This is the story that many romance and clop writers try and fail to make.
2. This story really earns the mature rating, and not just for a bit of swearing and screwing, but for actually involving mature situations and themes. This is an adult story that actually demands an adult audience to get the most out of it.
3. I like the relationship between Soarin and Spitfire. They're essentially as close as two people can be to best friends with sexual tension in a chain of command setting. Keep it that way.
4. You really could utilize Rainbow Dash more. I mean, she's a great friend of Spitfire and Soarin. And after your teasing with her and Spitfire being bisexual...
6. Dashie should have come along with Spitfire to speak with Soarin.
7. The callsign reveal excuse is flimsy as fuck. All callsigns are in some way insulting or derogatory -- it's a sign of friendship and respect you can be that casual with each other.
8. As a military officer, Spitfire has no reason to be threatened by her callsign -- she hardly interracts with civvies and her underlings under chain of command can't just call her by it.
9. i like that you're avoiding building a big harem for Soarin in favor of focusing on one actually strong and compelling relationship that feels real instead of forcing Soarin to g3t all teh mares bcuz he 1z th3 sXXXy.
10. Vinyl Scratch was just furious with Spitfire and now she wants to fuck her? Please, no, don't do this, especially if it involves a threesome with Soarin; Spitfire having sex with Soarin not only doesn't really add anything, but it also undermines the admirable message about strong friendship and the validity of platonic affection with no romantic or carnal component.
11. Octy's going to waste in this fic, but I hear she and Dashie are currently single and into mares...
12. Can we get a scene of Dashie, Soarin, and Spitfire making it painfully clear to the blackmailer why he should keep his mouth shut, including threats to press charges?
13. The sex is hot, if not the most realistic.
14. Don't forget that these characters are professionals with standards and rules operating in a rigid chain of command -- they're military personnel -- they can't just forget that and ignore the rules!
So there you go. Please think of what I said. Rest assured I'll read the next chapter and will give you an earful.
I love this story.
Seriously, love it. Again and again. This chapter ending was absolutely perfect. I canNOT wait to read the next one!
7845909 well I can't entirely say I agree with everything you said, but the feedback is always welcome regardless
if you want some detailed answers as to why I wrote certain parts certain ways, feel free to PM me and I'll do my best to explain. Other than that, the fic isn't over yet so some of the points you made might or might not be resolved later on 
Thanks!
There is a very small list of Anthro clopfics that have actually interesting storylines and don't just play out like pornos. This is on that list.
Really love your work with this one, so please keep it going.
Also, can we have that Soarin'xVinylxSpitfire clopscene next chapter please? The shit you write is gooood, my dude.
7847168 Yeah I really find clopfics with zero story to be really boring. I try to put at least some plot (huehuehue
) written in to keep things interesting. Thankya!
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I'd rather do things in comment form because I believe in open discussion of stories between the writer and the readers, but I'll PM you.
7848203 Only because I dont want to spoil anything
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Ah! PM you soon.
Welp... This took a weird turn...
But, the development of character personality in such few chapters is incredible. I say stay your course on this, despite what others say or think, because this is a work of art in terms of depth of storyline.
I eagerly await the next installment, Mr Canadian.
Well, now all the conflict is resolved in a 30 discussion and now there's going to be a threesome. GG, this fic.
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awwww come on i want to see the threesome damnit
Wow. Surprised Vinyl wants to share so easily.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let the three form a threeway relationship. They would look so well together.
I am ready for the threesome. I can't wait cx
7992512 Shoot if I had a girlfriend and my best friend of 20 some odd years was lonely id offer a threesome
Bros before hoes. Or I guess in this instance, gals before... pals? Whatever you get my point (Disclaimer: Canadianbrony91 does not condone calling or referring to female friends or beneficiaries "hoes" without context and does not claim responsibility for any or all consequences related or applied to the usage of such language)
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Spitfire is jelly.
Soarin knows Sgt Arch Dornan? Sgt Arch Dornan is a member of the Wonderbolts? I'm so confused...
8080561 Um... Yeah. That's who it is. I guess. 68.media.tumblr.com/d5fb9c33fb6aaa841eb0de851cefa653/tumblr_oo2uptpQfn1skw3qpo1_540.png