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Well done!! Well done indeed
very good. sweet and hot. Good job!
Another amazing story! Fantastic work!
Aw, that was so sweet!
Absolutely phenomenal story!! Dare I say one of the best for this genre!
Definitely wouldn't mind a sequel to this, just for the passion of it alone.
An out right fantastic story. Sweet a tugging on all of one's heartstrings. I only wished we could have gotten some chapters where we get to read about Rainbow's reaction to the news, once they have confirmed that she is getting a Little Brother.
And perhaps a sequel story where we get to read about Windy & Bow dropping off Rainbow Dash to be babysat by the Shy Family when it is time for the Lil Bro to be born. And for them to picking up Rainbow Dash from the Shy Family, as she gets to meet her Brother for the first time. And learn what his name is.
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Thank you! I'm glad to hear that you liked my story. Regarding a sequel, I admit that there is certainly more to this story that I could have told. I could have done what you have suggested and shown what happened going forward, but I believe the story is better as-is. I wanted to let the reader imagine all of the happy times that Rainbow and her family have coming to them, just as Bow and Windy are left to imagine it.
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You're very much welcome my friend.
But, i must simple urge you to make that sequel. It would be just **SO, AWESOME!** to be reading it. As i just have that strong feeling of being left in the middle of it. I would even be willing to have you payed, for you to write it, as i really feel that the sequel story needs to be told.
Still i understand if that sequel story will never be written. And i am sorry if i came off as a bit forceful in my begging. It is just it isn't many times i came across a story this good, and my heart just went into bursting mode for a sequel to it.