Life is going well for Gordon. Two years ago he won the jackpot on the lottery and decided to build his dream home in the Yorkshire countryside. 6 months after moving in, he wakes up one day and realises that either the hills have moved, or he has.
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I wish people in the US would feel the same about helping their fellow countrymen.
And also, you’ve described perfectly about America’s elite with all the gerrymandering and corruption. I hate Trump but he’s right, Washington DC is a damn swamp full of corrupted on both sides of the aisle. Follow the money and you’ll find that both parties work for the rich.
Is it me or celestia getting stupid every day all the guilt she has done and rolls with it stupid idiot I am going to punch her in the face
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that system sounds like socialistic democratic what Norway and other northern European countries have.
every country has their pros and cons. For example America has lower tax rate but Norway and other welfare countries have high tax rate. Another example, im from Finland we have conscription switch means that all men when aged at 18 must go thru either military or civil service for a year. Americans would probably see this disturbing because your government is basically forcing you to go thru army, thou im personally was not complaining because they pay you to thru this and it was fun.
You know at the beginning of this story I was fully ready to hang Celestia by her own Regalia, but the more of her past that got revealed the more I started feelingng sorry for her.
So much has happened, between being pressured by the nobility, facing religious zelots, the crimes of one of her past mentors and being tricked into killing her own lover.....I can see just how it all broke her in the end.
I think all she can do now is try and fix what she can, one being sitting down with Gordon and telling him EVERYTHING good and bad and then kowtowing and asking his forgiveness. This is something she CAN fix and I think it will be good for both of them.
Other than that, well thats up to time and healing.
(I can not believe i type this all out on my phone at 3:30 in the morning, shows how much I love this story that I put myself through such hell )
:3
Interesting background explanations, and still there is that mysterious thing in the back... Also nice job with the double chapter update.
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Finland mentioned! See ya at the marketplace!
Suomi mainittu! Torilla tavataan!
Well, it is certainly quite a mess that Celestia has ended up in. I guess it is about time she starts to clean it up. That said, it will most likely not be easy, but then again, nothing worthwhile ever is.
I can't imagine what it's going to take for us last year to clean up her mess but one thing is certain Gordon what may be the center of attention and maybe he will need to take a trip to Griffin Stone hopefully in time he can make up with Celestia but can't wait for the next chapter hopefully comes out a lot sooner it's been months since the last chapter.
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It doesn’t sound so fun in America because the US is constantly involved in a conflict unlike Finland. The work of politicians and the elite.
I still want to know what this was about in the last chapter.
Eeyup.
so this was entirely the nobles and starswirl the bearded fault......and poor tia fell for it hook line and sinker.....poor tia at first I hated this version and feared a conversion burau if tia found earth.....but now.....I wanna give her a big old hug and dry her tears and comfort her.....cause that's the kind of guy I am
…….and yet I wonder why im still single....nice guys finish last my Canadian arse
I think that one question on progress behind scenes was a poisoning attempt.
These two chapters are definitely what this story needed.
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Remove the closing quotes at the end.
Missing space.
It is plural, so it is ‘‘crusaders' ’’.
Either singular (a) or plural (-es).
Missing comma behind Bosphoramus.
what gonna happen in next chapter? i hope there something good in there.
I wondering if this is going to be one of those things that comes full circle. You know the prophecy she was trying to prevent was ironically caused by her actions. Gordon was able to reach Equestria so what’s to say others won’t be able too? It would be interesting for Celestia to have to make the choice to either end the cycle by sacrificing herself and perhaps atoning or continuing and learning things have changed drastically in human levels of advancement and military might. But who knows honestly, with this twist I’m winding what’s going to happen
I'm not the only one who thinks Rainbow's comments and Celestia's sadness are completely justified, right?
Awesome story! When next awesome chapter!?
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True. And She did say Gordon reminded her of someone and with like millions of humans that were in Equestria and 7 billion humans on earth it's unlikely that you can chalk it up to a coincidence
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Yeah like Ispector Bob.
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Didn't say it was.
So what, people can own guns in Britain, at all?
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Handguns are banned and it's hard to get guns in general there.
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Even retired soldiers?
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Not sure about that one. But probably.
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Yeah, you're really supposed to hand your service weapons back when you leave and it's pretty hard for you to take them without someone noticing.
After the Hungerford massacre of 1987 and Dunblane Massacre of 1996, the only firearm type you can really legally have in the UK (besides air rifles) are muzzle-loaded shotguns (like a double-barrel), and you have to have a valid reason for owning one.
You can't just buy one just for the sake of it, you have to provide justification to the authorities, like for example, hunting. Self defence isn't recognised as one.
But when I say UK, I mean England, Scotland and Wales. Because of The Troubles and a few other political factors, Nothern Ireland's a different field entirely.
Considering what happened last time Gordon asked to go to the loo, I'm not surprised he'd want to go himself.
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You do have a point there. I have a few friends in the FBI up in D.C and they always told me that the politicians that we trust are often times our enemies. Me being a Dual Citizen in both Mexico and the US I come across more corruption in my life time then both my parents combined.
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I’ve been to the UK a few times because of my job (Bodyguard, security contractor, etc) but when I first visited England my co-workers and I arrived to the airport in London, we had our weapons confiscated by several peace officers. They questioned us, one officer in particular, Jeremy if I remember, actually threatened me to put me in a sell just because I brought my AR-15 custom. I completely understand they’re trying to do there job. But harassing me for just bringing my weapon that is required to do my job is completely stupid. We had the right paperwork and all............and if I remember correctly I did use some harsh racial slurs to Jeremy. One of them being that his mother was a yank and a
whore.I do hope this story continue s old chap it is a good read just minor typos
Update?
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Not too long hopefully. I'm writing bits at a time. I have some time off next week so I should be able to get some more done, if not finish it. (My collaborator will then need time to go through it).
There's definitely more to come.
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Please continue
Is the next chapter almost finished
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My editor/collaborator is looking through it. It's more of a filler chapter though, to move things along until major plots points come up.
more chapter please.
hey there, i hear hasbro is gonna make the final season 9 for my little pony friendship is magic.
so.....this dead or what?
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Still going. My proofreader/collaborator is looking through it. I’ve already made starts on several future chapters.
9322353 The Scandinavian military is fun!
When you're conscripted into the Norwegian military for the obligatory 1 year of service...
And Sir Nils Olav of the Royal Guard being promoted to Brigadier.
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