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Twilight Velvet and everypony else that cares about Twilight is worried about her. After finding her passed out in her tower she decides to put her hoof down.

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i_am_the_jam

i_am_the_jam #1 · Mar 15th, 2016 · · ·

Great story!!!

CommisarSilver

CommisarSilver #2 · Mar 15th, 2016 · · ·

A warm story to read.

Cross Lament

Cross Lament #3 · Mar 16th, 2016 · · ·

Moms...

tirilee

tirilee #4 · Jun 2nd, 2016 · · ·

I had to learn that lesson too.

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #5 · Oct 17th, 2018 · · ·

Nice interactions between mother and daughter.

Legatus

Legatus #6 · Feb 28th, 2019 · · ·

GREAT READ! Loved it!

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #7 · Nov 15th, 2020 · · ·

So I have a question. How much of what Twilight was woking on did you make up? The Tree of Life I recognize from one of our world's fake religions (any religion is fake to me, but that's not worth going on about here). But not the rest.

And let's be honest about one thing here.

Twilight sighed and internally debated if she should play along or return to her tower. It would be child's play to just teleport out of the room. On the other hoof, the bed was comfortable and she had passed out over her work. A terrible thought occurred to her. "Wait. You didn't carry me through Canterlot did you?"
"It wasn't the first time I've done it, Twily."

It's a mom's job to embarrass the horseapples out of their kids. On top of everything else they do for us. But their first job is to embarrass us to no end.

Velvet just reminded Twilight of that. And she's not sorry either.

RoyalBardofCanterlot