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*brrrrinnngg...brrrrinnng*
...Can somepony get that phone?
...'Cause I bucking called it!
Well... I can't say I know for sure how to react to Night Light here. On one hand... there is nothing, nothing more important to a parent than the physical and mental well being of their children. Including pride. Granted, something like this isn't something you just accept without doing at least a spit-take, but still. He seriously fucked up and likely ruined his marriage with that stunt he pulled.
On the other hand... I'm intimately aware of just how much alcohol changes a person in large amounts. Besides, from the sound of things, Night Light likely wouldn't have done this if not for Iron Lance goading him on. In all likelihood, Night Light would have eventually either gotten over it, or at least accepted that there was nothing he could do.
Can't wait to see where this goes.
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See, the thing is, I'm not so sure Night Light actually did anything, other than tell quite possibility the worst individual of his son/daughter 'problem'.
This needs a bit of proof reading.
If you need some help fixing some stuff up dont be afraid to ask.
next few chapters please
Did I seriously start both of my comments like that? Er... oops? Sorry about that.
7247262 That's a good point. We don't even know if Night Light did it, or if Iron Lance just left him there to take the blame. That still doesn't change the fact that Night Light is putting pride before his children though.
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True enough, though I'd give him the benefit of the doubt, as he was plastered, and the outburst he had before is an all too common one, a knee-jerk reaction to change most fathers regret afterwards.
that would work better as
“I can’t believe she knew the entire time!” I felt so embarrassed. “It’s like being walked in on by your parents.”
“Ah should have known Ah couldn’t keep this from Granny.”
hmm... consider changing that to
“But then again... you do seem more of the type who/that enjoys it with friends.”
you had it right in the next line.