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Nice chapter
that might go better as
“Y’know what? Fine!” or “Y’know what, fine!”
in this context, that would be affect
Man Night Light comes off as a jerk.
Shining is/was captain of the royal guard and he married a princess, with whom he now runs the Crystal Empire. Dusk became a prince after being Celestias student for many years. Both of them have saved Equestria so what more would a dad want.
We will find out in the upcoming chapters of this story.
Btw I think he just couldn't handle the situation, it must be quite the shock. I will look forward for a few more chapters.
that would be better as
”Maybe I should catch up with the Cakes. I haven’t seen them yet.”
7241497 hes going to do something stupid i can just tell
7241721
Well then he has to live with the consequences.
next few chapters please
Night Light is a jerk...he should be proud of what his kids had already accomplised or is that not even good enough....I seriously hate males that are exactly like that. I have a dislike for characters that cant accept it if their children want to be different...
This is turning into a very enjoyable story, keep it up.
-Frost
I think Night Light's outburst would feel more organic if he had used traditionalist rhetoric.