Spike repeatedly stumbles upon everypony during their most embarrassing moments. Again and again, both through pure curiosity and a seemingly unknown force.
Somepony is up to something, but who is it?
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PonyThunder
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A nice and simple quick read. If this was food, it would be a snack. And who doesn't like a good snack from time to time?
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Well, it's not done yet :P
But I'm glad you like it so far!
Not too much has happened yet, but I definitely get the impression that plenty will. Color me with anticipation.
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Well, the general gist is that Spike will see each of the Mane 6 doing something they consider embarrassing. But the conclusion as to why Spike is witnessing them all won't be revealed until the end...
more plz
This seems interesting, I'll keep watch.
OMG, I LOVE IT
yay
This is pretty funny.
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Glad you enjoyed it so far. Hopefully it gets funnier!
It's Discord, or Pinkie...it has to be.
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Hmmmmm
Call her bluff, Spike. You know you want to. So what if all of Ponyville would know about your other secret with Rarity, it isn't like ponies would start avoiding him because of it. Like he said, everypony already knows that he has a huge crush on Rarity.
....right???
OK, so far:
-- Twilight Sparkle apparently writes adult stories. Two questions: 1/are they possibly clopfics, or actual novels to be published? and 2/how would she knows about a good romance novel unless she has some experience in the matter? I think there may be a bigger secret to be had--a secret coltfriend in the wings type of rumor.
-- Rainbow Dash apparently likes tea parties with her pet tortoise Tank. It's a bit up from the Pony Play Dates. I bet Flutters suggested to her. and Speaking of Flutters...
-- Fluttershy is apparently a hardcore hoofball fan. All I can say is awesome!! I wonder which team she roots for, or even better, if she's a fan of the Equestrian Hoofball League--if that exists. I bet ya that just like Fluttershy intro'ed RD to tea parties, RD showed Fluttershy hoofball.
I wonder who else that Spike is gonna 'accidentally' see too much of... And Discord is too obvious...but so is Pinkie. I have a feeling that it's gonna be someone we never expected...
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Twilight Sparkle writes TASTEFUL romance novels :P
Rainbow Dash does enjoy the finer things in life...as long as nopony is watching her...
Fluttershy enjoys hoofball for no real reason. But how could she ever let everypony know, being how shy and reserved she always is?
As for who is the culprit...you'll just have to wait to see. But keep in mind I'm not writing this as a mystery novel so don't expect to be all that surprised or anything....
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I've already got the comedic punchline figured out for the end of the story, but that's a good idea :P
PLEASE don't let Spike et the short end of the stick at the end of this. PLEASE?
not sure what to think of this story. It's interesting and i want to know who the person behind this is but at the same time I find the interactions between spike and the M6 he's met so far to be rather brief and kinda quick.
Gona track this one to see how it goes.
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Yeah I have trouble sometimes with pacing. I'm trying to get better at slowing things down though.
It's Flurry Heart's random burst of magic isn't it?
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That, I will rule out. Sorry :)
I'm calling Angel Bunny as the culprit.
...... Hmmm.... I believe I know who the culprit is here gentleman...
I think it was Discord!
In the Study!
With the Wrench!
.... Okay- fine. Minus the Study, and the wrench- but I still say it's Discord having fun and causing a little Chaos for our Draconic friend. Hehe~
Also- Bonus Chapter Idea!
If it IS Discord who is in control of these little events, wouldn't it be funny if the Mane Six were able to turn this around so that perhaps say- Celestia walked in on HIM perhaps- playing with Pony Dolls?~ ..... Just an idea.
I can imagine...
:what's that, Tank? You want sugar in your tea? One lump or two? Two? Okay, anything for you..
LOL XD
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Something tells me there isn't much of anything Discord could be embarrassed about :P
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Wouldn't that be the fun part though?~ Trying t figure out something that even DISCORD doesn't want others to know about him?~ .... He can't be an open book all the time you know. Even he has to have a few secrets~
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I'll ruminate on that. I've only got a loose plan on how I'm going to end the story. Trying to think of how to embarrass Pinkie Pie is similarly difficult...
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Well, why 'Embarrass' her in the Traditional sense? Pinkie is a very 'Out of the Box' character, so the situation just has to be equally out of the box for it to have the same kind of effect on her.... It'd be funny (and ironic) if through out the entirety of this Comedy story, Pinkie's moment would be an utterly serious one. X3
Of course, you could do something similar like what you did with Twilight (romantically in other words,) and have Spike stumble across Pinkie's Love Letter's to Cheese Sandwich- that she hasn't plucked up the confidence to send yet. Spike, being the automatic mailman he is, genuine friend (and feeling exceptionally like Murphy's Law has it out for him today) decides sends all of her letters to Cheese Sandwich via Dragon Flame- thinking that the Mail Service just couldn't keep up with him since he is going from town to town. She'd probably be totally devastated that every single mushy lovey dovey letter she had ever written to Cheese (but never intended for him to read) just got sent to him.... And Spike didn't realize what he had done until Pinkie told him exactly what was IN those letters. x3
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Good idea, but I do have a particular exchange in mind regarding Pinkie's role in the story. I just can't imagine her ever being embarrassed about anything, possibly to the point that she desperately wants to be embarrassed :)
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XD nice. I see where you ARE going with this then. Alright, well I hope the next chapter is filled with inspiration, and other such!
7028693 Doubt it...that would be way to obvious
Not buying it for a moment. Virgin porn is always horribly written.
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Would it ever happen any other way?
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Well, I'm certainly looking forward to finding out. Next time, on 'The Dragon Who Knew Too Much!"
no no it cant be Pinky or Discord, it's gotta be
trollestia!
See, now this chapter, this chapter is funny. that dialogue nailed it for me.
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Glad I did it right this time! :)
Lola
Just as an aside: this doesn't work. As written, it means a curiosity for curiosity. Take out "thirst for" and it's ok.
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Fixed!
And yeah, I was going to write two more chapters. One for Rarity's embarrassment and then the finale, but I couldn't think of anything worth writing for Rarity. It just came out better this way. And I never planned on doing one for Pinkie Pie, as you can tell by the end of the story :)
You have The_Whovian16 to thank for the ending punchline! I think it was a great way to end it
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Thanks, I'm honestly amazed lol. I'm grinning ear to ear.
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Oh well, sometimes it just works out that way, I guess. Really a fun little story, though. I definitely liked it.
NO YOU DIDN'T SEE MY PLAYING WITH MY DOLLS!
Space Balls.....
funny good
Actually, cherries aren't a berry. They're a pit fruit, like plums and peaches. You can tell cuz they have a pit. Don't worry about it though, the majority of people think they're berries.
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I knew it wouldn't be long until somebody pointed out something inaccurate about that part lol. I'm leaving it in for comedic effect!
Damn, this is good!