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PonyThunder


Author of mostly cute/funny one-shots and a handful of heartwarming stories. I also make art! https://www.deviantart.com/doodledonutart

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Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash go on a sisterly camping trip in the Everfree forest, and Scootaloo has been looking forward to it for a long time. But lately, Rainbow Dash has been worried that Scootaloo might outgrow the unbridled adoration of her as she matures and Dash's own flaws come to light.

My tags: Heartwarming Uplifting

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

7778577 Thanks for reading :twilightsmile:

7778596 You're welcome, I love reading anything involving Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo :scootangel: :rainbowdetermined2:

Pretty cute and heart-warming. I felt the end was a little rushed and could have been drawn out a bit more, but perhaps the sudden turnaround was what it needed and I'm just picky. Keep it up!

7778683 Thanks for reading. Definitely could have been a bit more descriptive, I agree. But I was going for a more simple ending, since I honestly found the premise to be a little shaky to begin with. It's hard to try and come up with semi-unique one-shot ideas that haven't been done to death.

This story was pretty great. I definitely liked the forest sounds video

7778801 Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading! :twilightsheepish:

Nice. :rainbowkiss: I always like seeing Rainbow sisterly.

There were some times where she didn't feel like the element of loyalty at all, and now was one of them.

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Pretty cute story.

7781016

You're welcome ^_^.

This fic must be that good if it has no dislikes. You're sure as heck not recieving one from me!

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