7109007 Part of that comes from the fact, this originally was a one chapter story, but i got a good feedback from it and then LegionofPony and I got together and re-vamped an re-edited it, we added so much that it couldn't be one chapter, so we broke it into four, with different character developments and characters each new chapter. Basically the first four chapters take place on the same day, the rest of the series will be more diverse.
Bravo! loved this chapter, love how Red was rewarded with the strongest orgasm she ever had and promise of future pleasure. I wonder what awaits for our lovely nurse?
7142895 Well Silver is currently working on the next chapter's rough draft, but I haven't heard from him in a while, given he's busy with life. We'll get the next chapter out as soon as possible.
7225522 I am writing the next three chapters simultaneously, and as soon as i have the drafts ready legion and I ( Though Legion is the biggest driving force, he's such a talented and visual writer and editor) will post them.
I've just been really busy with work, life, and I've been trying to improve my writing so i have been editing myself over what I've already written.. It should be ready in a week or so, hopefully I'll be on time, i like to try and meet deadlines but as they say La vie se passe (sorry my french is rusty)
“Wot th’ ‘ell was ‘at? Did we go down th’ bloody rabbit ‘ole or somefin’?” Tenderheart asked her friend, watching as Nurse Redheart walked away after giving her a wink and a chuckle.
Is it me or are the last coupla chapters basically the same thing?
7109007 In terms of clop, yes they're similar. In terms of set-up, characters, or story-building, not at all.
7109007 Part of that comes from the fact, this originally was a one chapter story, but i got a good feedback from it and then LegionofPony and I got together and re-vamped an re-edited it, we added so much that it couldn't be one chapter, so we broke it into four, with different character developments and characters each new chapter. Basically the first four chapters take place on the same day, the rest of the series will be more diverse.
7109302 The latter half of this chapter is in italics. I submitted a fix for it on G-docs.
7109432 fixed it
7111002 Legion and i thank you
7117976 Glad you like it so far!
Love this fic
7127813 thank you, Legion and I appreciate it
7127813 Glad you like it!
Bravo! loved this chapter, love how Red was rewarded with the strongest orgasm she ever had and promise of future pleasure. I wonder what awaits for our lovely nurse?
7142895 Well Silver is currently working on the next chapter's rough draft, but I haven't heard from him in a while, given he's busy with life. We'll get the next chapter out as soon as possible.
Anyhow, glad you like it!
Next chapter please.
More of that unicorn on red heart, okay?
7225522 I am writing the next three chapters simultaneously, and as soon as i have the drafts ready legion and I ( Though Legion is the biggest driving force, he's such a talented and visual writer and editor) will post them.
I've just been really busy with work, life, and I've been trying to improve my writing so i have been editing myself over what I've already written.. It should be ready in a week or so, hopefully I'll be on time, i like to try and meet deadlines but as they say La vie se passe (sorry my french is rusty)
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I understand, thank you for not letting it die.
Have a nice day.
To this all I can say is "Cannon Ball!!!"