I like the new addition with more Soarin', cocky little bastard he is. :P

Ya know... This stuff could explain why Mrs Cake had unicorn and pegasus 'twins', could be mr cake is infertile....... This sounds like something to spread on forums, so I'll be on my way.

............ Oh, and good story~

Oh boy. This is going to be sick. Good story.

low-intensity electrical zap

Low intensity electricity isn't noticeable. If she wants to show redheart she needs to do something like touch her nose with it.

This mare, this hard-flanked mare that Redheart once viewed as a whorse of a mare and hated beyond any other pony before this moment, was now asking her in confidence

I would think Redheart would respect her even if she doesn't like her. She is her boss after all and is clearly a competent and hardworking mare.