I am the high priest of Snuggloth the dark one, I am the champion of his armies, the undisputed king of Snuggles.... fear me
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Over three thousand years ago, an ancient conflict lead to the creation of the Kingdom of the north from the Wolf tribes of the Susi. That nation is now reaching out to Equestria. However, Celestia's wrath is all that meets the King of the wolves. It may be up to an un-involved Princesses to resolve this conflict before war erupts.
(Anthro tag is ONLY for the wolves, no anthro ponies)
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Nice. You revealed the story from its hiding spot.
Now to see the thoughts of others.
Interesting
Sooo..Who is the white wolf? I was kinda confused who was who during the story
(And cute Rose is really cute)
7065060 that is Oracle
Shaman's wife and the King's daughter
7065170 Ah okay
7065649 she is one of Rosie's friends and teachers
7065662 And the main teacher is that one eyed general's duaghter?
7065668 Rosie's main teacher is her mother who will be in the next chapter
7065679 Ah, that explain a lot thank you!
Well written chapter. Dagfinn is exactly like pictured him.
And i found this nitpick:
This here: every now and again instead of ' everyone'
Good luck for the future my friend
May the Spirits of Inspiration guide and help you.
:insert Celtic music:
7194672 lol thank you ^_^
and I was going to message you to ask what you thought lol ^_^
I have a story up and ready too for the conflict between him and the other generals. It will be quite entertaining. Unlike the others, he is far more of a selfless hero of the people. as the others are heroes and hereditary heroes of the North itself
7194690 just like me :-)
I would rather be a soldier among others than be a lord who cares little for the common soldier.
When you fight with those you lead, you lead by example and true courage, but if you show little care for them and don't fight with them and instead be a coward who stays back and uses others as meatshields of no value, you will lose their trust and loalty towards you and they fight against you because you don't deserve to lead them no matter the skill.
A true leader cares for those he/she leads.
Also a question. Are there any female generals?
Just curious.
This has been nice so far. Good job
7194740 there was. Used to be five generals, I was going to throw that in there. But for now, something happened to make there only be three
7195426 Ah, okay. Thanks for telling that.
Have a good night.
i need to sleep. .... also it is almost midnight here in finland... so yeah, good night day or whatever the time or approriate saying is.... and im rambling... i really need to start sleeping....
7195600 aye nighters
The fury of a berserker lost in his bloodrage... it is not the easiest thing to snap out of without proper training and strength of will. If you see someone who is your ally, a berserker lost to the throes of bloodrage may accidentally attack. It is even worse if the berserker harbors a dislike for the one he sees.
But dwarwes have it mastered and don't let it impede them and focuses all of the bloodrage to those who are the actual enemies. So learn from them and you may avoid what happened to Legenda.
(he is the berserker, right?
7286722 yups but its a little more than that
I thought I'd been following this, but I will now. Yay for "Melody!"
~Melly~
7288594 ^w^ I am happy you are liking her role. You can post her fanart here if you like, I can even feature it in the description
7288741
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Fanart posted.
You can, if you'd like. Is her name supposed to be a secret, tho?
~Melly~
7290407 not secret, but obscure
>w<
That picture still blows me away
7290503
Ahh, I see.
Thanks!
~Melly~
7290842 ^w^
This is really awesome! I like that there is a story about wolves. I can't wait until you write more. Keep up the good work.
7292080 thank you ^_^
I am glad I can make people happy still
7292704 Indeed you can. XD Keep up the good work.
So wait a minute. Are the Ponies also Anthro like the wolves or are they regular ponies?
I'm only saying this because in chapter 4, Shining Armor was back on all fours, so that tells me something. So I just want to know if this was intentional or un intentional.
7301240 Regular ponies.
Only anthro beings are the wolves.
Oh, Thank you.
Can't wait for the next chapter though.
7301254 lol there will be fighting in the next chapter... lol
7301258 Wohoo!
Heh..I finally got some time. By the way I never really figured out how Rose and her mother look like.
Well this chapter was something!
Obviously not inspired by Game of Thrones
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7435213 Haven't watched it even though everyone tells me I should
King of the north was actually inspired in parts by the kalevala though mostly by the grudge between Sweden and Finland sparked during the Swedish crusades and a novel I wrote with that very inspiration. And a slight bit of influence from warhammer 40k Granted Susien Kuningas was in no way shape or form inspired by Leman Russ. I made Susien Kuningas before I knew that Leman Russ existed. It is just a bloody awesome coincidence that they are both known as the wolf king and are very VERY norse.
Well, I must say that i liked the bit of backstory for Dagfinn. You did a great job with that scene and surprised me with it. I wasn't expecting that.
Nice work, friend.
The meeting with the Sisters was quite an event. Solar Beams and Horn Charges to gore the King. Quite a strong fella this King. Really, he grabbed the beam of SOLAR PLASMA and it only singed him. That is some big Magic Resistance level right there
Now to see if what happens next. I eagerly wait for more.
Also, have song to listen. Hope you enjoy
7435260 I was hoping you liked it ^w^ it ties up some loose ends right? You can see why Legenda is so broken now right?
7435275 somewhat, yes.
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7435403 what is that from?
......This won't end well.
Wow, Celestia's an Asshole!
7444194 that is the thing about grudges. Even the nicest of people can hold them for a very long time
And in the end, there'll be someone to make you realize that you've made the mistake of not letting it go and move on.
To Quote Angry Joe: "You Done FUCKED It Up!"
Ugh
opposable thumbs
9788553
Thank you, spellcheck hates me for some reason.