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HiddenMaster


Who am I? Does it really matter? Probably not. Just sit back and enjoy stories drawn from the eldritch depths of a disturbed mind with a love for pastel colored ponies.

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Tirek has been defeated. Again.

A thousand years waiting. A thousand years gathering his strength, waiting for the one moment he needed to escape his accursed prison. A thousand years with only fading memories for company all for absolutely nothing.

Tirek was back where he started. No, that was a lie: he was even less than he was before.

This changes nothing. He is and always will be a proud warrior, and there is one thing he will never do.

He. Will. Not. Bow.


Set shortly after the Season 4 Finale. Does not follow the comics' canon, although certain elements may be taken from them.

Cover art taken from harwicks-art on deviantart. I have not asked for permission to use this and make no claims of owning this artwork, but should he ask, I shall remove the cover art as quickly as possible.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

He. Hadn’t. Sensed. It.
Three innocuous words,

Four Innocuous words


This looks like the start to something grand, even if it is just World building. Have a Like and a tracking.

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Ten times I read through this, looking for errors or particularly awkward sentences and the like. And I completely miss that.

Thanks for the heads up there, and thanks for the comment. Hadn't expected to get any for at least a day.

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I like to get my comments in before the comment space gets too crowded.
And no problem. In the rare case of future mistakes, would you prefer a correction via PM or Comment?

6979284 Either works, unless you spot a massive amount of mistakes, in which case a pm is preferred. Granted, I hope a pm is never necessary, because that would mean I seriously dropped the ball somewhere.

I did say I want to read this story if you go through with it. Now I want to read the next chapter. :)

P.S. You do need another pair of eyes on the draft, though.

I enjoyed this! An interesting look into Tirek and the thought process after losing.

Yes, I'd say continue with it! :pinkiehappy: It could lead to him falling deeply in love with Celestia and having loads of freaky centaur-alicorn babies :pinkiecrazy:

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