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A pony went through the worst, some think he is a monster but he is just a a lost soul trying to get his revenge. And another old mare's tale come true.



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*A pony who went through the worst, some think he is a monster but he is just a lost soul trying to get his revenge. And also another old mare's tale come true.
I fixed your description.

so this dosent link the marvel ghost rider but in the loosest of terms,
dont get me wrong i like it but i feel a little misled

I'm not reading your story until I can understand your god damn description.

2124013 Hi thanks for the comment it is more inspired but there will be more ref in the future

story seems good if not a little rushed, i will read on.

2198466 thanks for the comment it is my first try in writing

well its alright it has potential. it could do with more commas and better formating but still pretty decent. i think i will stick around to see where it goes.

so please tell me that we will see the ghost rider soon.
I want a penance stare.

i love the ghost rider.
just like the hulk he has no upper limit to his power.

2235590 So you did like it thats good to hear, but I won´t make him a Gary Stu

2235618 i trust that you will do the character justice
and nice cover art

this fricken amazing i hope it will continue for a long time

2241668 thx I also hope it will but I got the end in my head this is in a distance future

this was by the best chapter:pinkiehappy: one small critique though, can you be a bit more discribtive in you your story. i feel it would help the immersion aspect a lot. other than that you have a fav for a cool story thats only getting better :twilightsmile:

2244700 in this chapter is a little joke/reference hidden maybe you can find it (one hint the reference is from an anime)

2244715 is it "what a drag". i think shikamaru says it alot in naruto......

2244725 Ok another extrem big hint it is from one piece

2244740 well then i dont stand a chance:twilightblush: i couldent recall anything from that anime to save my life:twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush:

just thought of this. if he is the ghost rider ponified then what does he ride? a ponified motorcycle made of hellfire?

2267710 well I didn´t think through it funny thing I translate the german word for it Reiter and there was anothor word with the same meaning equestrian maybe that can be the answer in the next chapter

2268094 to bad that there is no hellfire in my story because he is from tartarus not hell, greek mythology maybe I put something like this in but no motorcycle the latest moving inovation is super speedy cider squeezy 6000

2268151 ok then do absyal flames patented just now by me: like black fire.

2268355 ok but this is my last answer for you because I´m in germany and it´s damm 3 am I wil build something in maybe let the flim flam brother build I don´t know so good night I can´t think anymore :applejackconfused:

please..deadpool vs eldricht abomination.........ghost rider comes out on top no doupt about it:rainbowdetermined2:

2304085 deadpool is unpredictibale maybe it´ll end so fc09.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/301/2/1/Deadpool_team_up_897_by_Eldelgado.jpg na I only showed this picture of a comic cover because it´s awesome :rainbowkiss:

I am a HUGE fan of ghostrider, Though I never thought anyone would do a fanfic. Never the less this fic is good :twilightsmile: and keep up the good work:pinkiehappy:

This is awesome! I think the Ghost Rider is really cool and I can't wait till more is done.

I'm going to take a break, I got so many ideas I must writ and sort them.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO*breath intake*OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! DEADPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!

2722496 Yes? But I don't use it so much.

Are .we going to hear deadpools voices and pinkie with deadpool maybe

Why did you put this on hiatus

4077748 I don't have the mood it is darkand sad I will continue but I can't write at the moment.

Perfect fiction! Please next chapter!

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