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FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the story so far
737360
Thank you its going to hopefully get even better from here
i like the end thing i love that abilaty
why is he getting better at flying?he has only flied one time through out the story so far
She will be flying alot more later Trust me. Also have you played fallout 3 or fallout new vegas?
OMG HE'S AN ALICORN!!!!!!!
sounds great so far
when are you going to make this story worthy if the tag mature ?
i cant believe he's an alicorn i mean i saw the hint's but i never thought it would realy happen
LOVE
THE STORY STORY SO FAR
I
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it will get there trust me
738204 i have played fallout 3
its a fun game 
i love the story so far
Here we go everypony chapter 5. Also i would like to take a second to ask something of my readers. i know you probably don't care and or your not going to read this but please if your going to down-vote my story could you at lest send me a comment saying what you didn't like. it doesn't do anypony any good to just run off, i cant make the story better, and your wont have a more enjoyable thing to read. so please all i ask it that you let me know what you thought was wrong.
Snowy
i dont think anyone should downvote it it's great
also if anypony out there reading this notices any really garish spelling mistakes please let me know about them so i can fix it. any small stuff i should find on my own but if for some reason spell check failed utterly i would appreciate the help
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that stuffs comeing in chapter 8. At the end of 7 she has alot on her mind and now she has to sort through it.
also thank you for the comment.
A tad messy, but quite enjoyable. good job
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Thank you friend it gets better structerd in later chapters.
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Heh yay there is going to be a stalion as well.
Ooo fallout equestria, shit, gore, ooo special powers, shit, first fic, ooo mysteries, fuck it, I'm reading it, screw you mind.
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SHIT SPOILER! I hate you!
As soon as I read "shi" and "hir" I thought, hermaphrodite? Is this the special abilities the authors talking about? Son of a besting that sucks.
God dammit. Too many spelling mistakes makes it hard to enjoy the story. Get a proof reader please.
Ach. Too many spelling mistakes. Too quick to use healing potions, it's not like they grow on trees. Too many errors. Too many. Ok watevs, I'll just say it. The story sucks. You need to have someone read through it and edit it because the mistakes in the story make it less enjoyable. I'm sorry, but that's the truth.
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ya i know i think Im'a put this one on an indefinite hiatus till i can figure out how to fix it
war never changes, maybe the weapons or the reason but never does the out come change, it just leads to more war