you and your new stories now i got something to try and find but all the same great story

god lord can't wait for more!!!

NIce, now im waiting for the sequel

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I'm not sure of what you are trying to say but...
anyway
The Fearless warrior ends at chapter 24
but the sequel is already posted here and I'm working on it... if that's what you wanted to say

879888
already heard that before

So first thing I notice is, Why no pony pics. I'm getting no pics for who the stories about.

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I don't get it about the pony pics

About the elements of harmony... I always saw that beam of energy as something that can purify, and not as some destructive power

About Rarity, I heard that before
it just seemed a good idea at the moment
I could have changed... but by the time I realized that it was, in fact, a bad idea, it was already too late...

But anyway, thanks for commenting here... I means a lot to see that more people think that my deviations are worth to be read
I hope you keep reading and always give me a feedback of my work!

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Sorry to hear that
But that's all right... at least you gave me a try

7965097 Hey there, glad to see someone else reading it! I do hope you are enjoying yourself as well~
Something you must note: This was my first fiction work and i took the liberty of altering characters as I saw fit for the plot and to give the story movement.
Another thing is that, when this story was written, too much was unknown about the cannon of the MLP verse, so I improvised and adapted as I saw fit.
Remember, this is a fictional work, based on an already existing franchise, made y someone with too much time on his hands and as a project to better train my english. So please, don't expect things to go 100% according tot he actual show.
But all in all, I really hope that this mediocre written piece of fiction can be a fount of entertainment for your. Cheers!
(On a side note, I always imagined Rarity not as a whore, but as a Lady with a free sexual life. After all she don't charge for her services )

This guy isent a viking, hes a kid who bought some shit from Walmart and got sucked into equestria. A real warrior would have more self control and situational awareness, this guy has neither. Props for trying I guess.