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I hope my skills improved at least 1%, anyway, if anyone is going to say something like
"Get a proofreader, improve your skills because science" or that kind of things, let me tell you I already know that. I cant find any proofreader, i dont know how, if you want to help me or something (at least say something that helps my handwrite) youre quite welcome. If you want to kill me because the thing i say about yout mother let me tell it wasnt me, it was my twin...the devil one...
Whatever it happens i hope you like my stories and dont burn my house for writing so bad.:twilightsmile:

if you want i could be your proofreader ;) because im sorry but you need One. your english isnt bad. However it is extremely apparent that you are not from an english speaking country, also sometimes you Seem to rush over a part, which makes it very unclear whats going on.

It appears squirrelking writes MLP fanfiction now. Cool.
Click HERE and then get a proofreader. Okay?

I do not see how this has more dislikes than likes, it is an interesting consept

I like it! Keep up the good work

Also Tia is either gonna be reeeeeeeally pissed or happy that Luna has found a special someone

1013582 Probably the spelling and its been done quite a bit so its not very interesting no offense to anyone who likes this but I've seen about fifty of these and it gets boring quick but I do approve of human x luna fics so here is a thumb up.

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who? anyway, thanks for this link, be sure ill use it.

Please Continue I want to know what happened next.

Or in other words

MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR

The brutalization of the English language aside, I approve of Luna love stories.

To many spelling errors and missing words made it hard for me to read this. Otherwise I slightly approve since it has Luna in it.

But first this is brought to you by me.
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So many errors...so little time.:twilightangry2:

errors or no im enjoying this, all that matters to me.......

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i have to answer this derpy, its my duty since i saw it. Yes im short of new, plus english is not my native language.

Yes this pleases me you may continue:moustache:

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thats good to hear....well, read XD, the thing is that there is someone else working with me correcting it (but we're quite short of time) and i dont want to betray his work this far. I'll ask him a few things, but just in case, what is your time line?

Dude.. wen will the next chapter be out??

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It's been.....so.......bucking long since i last got in here....i have so many people to thank for favoritizing (because of beeing lazy my english got even worse, so yay). This is year is specially asking me for giving all ive got in school, and i guess for my friend who is helping me in this fic is also busy with that, but i cant wait to get again to work on this (also, ill probably be drawing stuff, if i dont puke, i have something to do).

Everything changed, i remember how was this place a year ago, and it changed so much, sometimes i wonder if should keep the track of this, but, after seeing i have like 33 fics i have on mind (all of them are saved, i just need to work them), i only can think "i have to get again in this place and sell my soul"


So,
im not sure at all when it will be out, all i can say its that its done, but i have to check it for mistakes and to improve the clop part (my friend said so, and if i can be sincere, i was....different when i wrote that part). All i can add now is that im really sorry for not working for now, but i cant do anything, writing ask a time i lack right now.



Hope i can back to work again soon (the soonest time will probably be .....half june or so im afraid)

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