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Nevarius


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longer chapters.

Vikings are the ancestors of today's people from Scandinavia, the Vikings can maybe act like them sometimes.


clearer up the text pls

Nide #2 · Jun 13th, 2012 · · · Ops! ·

just to say,
it is not pink sense
it pinkie sense
not pink pie but pinkie pie

Vikings also have knives with them in battle.
Before you continue your story read up more on Vikings
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=paZBkbKM77g

vikings, ok
do you know anything about them?

cool story.
ps: i em from norway ona of the viking nations

742200
First of all, thank you for the fav :twilightsmile:

Now, about the story...
It is an old story, it is already complete and I'm working on the sequel.
Actually is my very first story, that's why the firsts chapters are so small. My main language is not english and I have many flaws that google and other dictionaries can't help me with.
I know a thing or two about vikings but I'm not even close to be an expert on the subject, and I didn't go researching about it because it was not that important to the story as you will notice later.

I didn't release all the chapters at once beceuse i'm buying some time for me xD
I'm in finals season so I have to study a lot and don't have much time to write.

Again, thank you for commenting and pointing things that I'll remember to avoid in the future:pinkiehappy:

this is gething better and better.
sorry bed english

Grammar Nazis Inbound, take cover!!!

Just saying..y'know try to fix your grammar and spellings.

Otherwise, pretty good

oh no,
this is going to hurt

Yeah RD, go and make angry the guy who almost kill u, that was so Brilliant:rainbowhuh:
By the way great story.

What's gonna happen when he hears Pinkie say Okie Doki LOKI?:derpyderp1:

THIS IS NORSLAND!!!!:flutterrage:

wow, i can't wait till the rest of the story comes out and i get to read what happens next. please hurry in posting these stories of yours

759281
You honor me with you words ^^
759671
Is what they say: To be brave is to have 90% of madness and 10% of actually courage:rainbowlaugh:
760321
Interesting point :rainbowderp:
It's a shame no one had pointed that when I was actually writing this down.
760321
In the words of that wise white and hyper buffed pegasus with tiny wings: YEAHHH!
761241
Don't worry about that, I'm posting 2 chapter at a time only to buy some time while I write two other projects. Probably tomorrow more two chapter will be posted:twilightsmile:

761680 VIKING RAGE!!!!!:flutterrage: and i am a proud descendant of a viking line.....

something that i may be related to Erik the red....

vikings the kings of the north

I don't mean to be rude but... English is not your first language is it?

782158
I think I said it a few times already:rainbowlaugh:
On in my profile and in an answer for a review of the story.

785978 YYYeeaahh...um... I don't think I've ever paid attention to either the comments or the writers profile

this is a gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood story :pinkiehappy:

loki :D
let me tell you something
loki was a s****
do you know how many children he have?
http://humon.deviantart.com/art/Loki-and-His-Children-212652937

793123
d'awwww xD
cute image xD
and damn, that's a lot of children... and I'm not sure if I want to know who are the mothers :rainbowderp:

awww his in love.......and he doesn't know.......haaaaaeeee.....so sad....:fluttershyouch:

that was a very goo chapter i hope that you wright more chapters soon:pinkiehappy:

FUUUUUU-- twilight what have you done!!!!!!! you released his darkside!!!!!!

you and your new stories now i got something to try and find :ajbemused: but all the same great story :twilightsmile:

god lord can't wait for more!!!:rainbowdetermined2:

I don´t know why but the last chapter remind me about the fight of link against his shadow, and GO RD don´t let go eravel.

OMG, Cliffhanger, eravel vs bad/evil eravel? rd in trouble?

NIce, now im waiting for the sequel

TWILIGHT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

after i did read chapter 22 i dient ona read eny more but after som days i desaided to read this.
and now i dont ona read more. so plz teal me when this is over ok.
sorry bed english:fluttercry:

863103
I'm not sure of what you are trying to say but...
anyway
The Fearless warrior ends at chapter 24
but the sequel is already posted here and I'm working on it... if that's what you wanted to say:unsuresweetie:

You missed spelled shock, not chock:rainbowlaugh:

BY ODIN'S BEARD I DECLARE MYSELF FIRST!

Eh...te endin would have been more funny if it was a bit longer and also if somepony came in and cock-blocked him :rainbowlaugh:

FIRST!

Dude I am going to kill you...:flutterrage:

How can you do that to Rarity:raritycry:
...Octavia was fine, but this, imma waste you.
:raritydespair:

879888
already heard that before :scootangel:

Hi this story is one of the very few good stories around but do not forget that the name is Pinkie Pie, not Pink Pie
But overall this story is pretty awesome :trollestia:

I was listening to this when Eravel went berserk. :flutterrage::rainbowkiss:

So first thing I notice is, Why no pony pics. I'm getting no pics for who the stories about.

LOL you found a new use for the Friendship beam. Instantclean power. You could sell that an make millions.

I gotta agree man. You just turned this thing into a bad clopfic. You've made one of the freaking elements of harmony a slut... that's real bad man.

1207392
I don't get it about the pony pics:rainbowderp:

About the elements of harmony... I always saw that beam of energy as something that can purify, and not as some destructive power :pinkiehappy:

About Rarity, I heard that before
it just seemed a good idea at the moment :rainbowlaugh:
I could have changed... but by the time I realized that it was, in fact, a bad idea, it was already too late...

But anyway, thanks for commenting here... I means a lot to see that more people think that my deviations are worth to be read :heart:
I hope you keep reading and always give me a feedback of my work!

This really doesn't feel like a "viking in Equestria"... the character may "be" a viking but he is acting like a normal person with an axe and a sword...:ajbemused:

I'm sorry but I'm out, I gave this story a go but I am just dissapoint.:ajsleepy: Our protagonist doesn't act like a Viking, and certainly doesn't seem to think like one, taking a modern day person who has a sword, axe, and berzerker rage just isnt doing it for me.

1424472
Sorry to hear that :ajsleepy:
But that's all right... at least you gave me a try :rainbowkiss:

742155 whoa i didn't notice that. my mind as i was reading just like auto corrected it for me. great now its bugging me that its wrong.

either was good story so far

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