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Suspenseful with a pencil.

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When Twilight Sparkle awakens, she is met with silence. The playground is empty, the trees retain their fruit and Ponyville is quiet.

Guided by her wits and the assistance of a mysterious force, Twilight must discover the fate of those who once were. In a forgotten time, she will piece together the uncanny mystery of those souls lost in the light, or forever be alone.

Whatever happens, she will try.

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Inspired by the game Everybody's Gone to the Rapture, a beautiful narrative driven exploration game that everyone should experience. Rated teen and dark as I will infrequently use dark themes. While I was inspired by the game, I will not be telling the same story, I simply want to put my own pony related spin on it.

Thank you to The Lunar Toaster for pre-reading.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

6965709 It took me a little while to press the submit button if I'm honest. I kept going back as I wasn't happy!

Very interesting concept, will read the full think tomorrow.

Intriguing. I will definitely be keeping an eye on this.

ROBCakeran53
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This looks very good so far. I eagerly await more.

It's a great story. Let's continue! @time shooter 2 A new good story, bro!

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