Twilight is the element of magic
Twilight Sparkle is an alicorn princess with VERRY powerful magic
Twilight Sparkle has her own castle
Twilight Sparkle has a brother called Shinning Armor and sister in law called Cadence, ruler of the Crystal Empire
Twilight has a dragon for an assistant and a pet owl
Twilight has 5 best pony friends
Twilight has a friend/ former villain as a student
She was is a verry bad alicorn filly
When Twilight used a time stopping spell it slowly made Twilight act the way of a teenager alone with her appearance and into a active little filly.
Chapters (1)
I just started the story and it sounds like a very interesting idea and I plan to read it but I would recommend finding an editor as there are a lot of instances of the wrong word being used and such so it makes the story a bit hard to read it as people have to try and figure out what you are trying to say.
I think the concept could be very entertaining just like I said could use an editor and will be by in a couple.of days to read this with or without the editor as I like the idea and am just giving some.time to find some help.
Good luck my fellow writer and may the dice always fall in your favor.
7319464 Thank you for the advise and I just got to find a editor, once I learn how to.
7320607 here a group meant to help writers connect to editors.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
Just read their rules and follow the instructions and you should easily find an editor.
Could you please keep writing as I would like to see how it goes, thanks