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BudCharles


16 year old Aussie nerd. Fan of MLP, Pokemon, HTTYD and a heap of other things. Mainly write Trixie stories and Scootaloo stories, because those characters are adorable >w<

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This story is a sequel to My Enemy's Enemy


Rainbow Dash is staying in Canterlot for a few days to perform in a Wonderbolts show, and she decides to take Scootaloo with her. Scootaloo finds herself becoming a celebrity of sorts at Central Canterlot School and begins basking in her new-found glory - but she soon notices a young changeling, Pupa, is being left out and tormented by the other students. Will Scootaloo be forced to put her popularity aside to help a filly in need?

(The prequel isn't necessary reading, all you need to know is changelings and ponies aren't enemies anymore, and the changelings live in Canterlot now, alongside the ponies :3)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 57 )

Hey, this looks cool. Can't wait for more!

You know, I kind of like the idea of having a changeling fall in love with a pony, or vice versa, or both. Even if that is not what you intended, I can tell that Pupa and Scootaloo are going to be great friends!



Anyway, 5 comments other than this on so far, 88 views, and---!:flutterrage: A DARK BAR WITH NEITHER A LIKE NOR A DISLIKE IN SIGHT! WHAT THE HECK?! TIME TO START FILLING THAT BAR UP, PEOPLE!


HERE! TAKE A THUMBS UP! I ALREADY LIKE IT!


No, seriously, I do!


...---! WHAT THE HECK?! WHY CAN'T I LIKE IT?! IT'S FROZEN! COME OOOOOONNN!
AAARRRRGH!

...Oh wait, there it is!

6978274 Thanks so much x3 I think it's maybe because I didn't put it in enough groups? Or maybe it just didn't catch on? I dunno XD But I'm glad you like the story so far :3

I don't think I should write romance because it'd be about as subtle as a nuclear meltdown, so I'll just stick with friendshipping for now XD Plus Scootaloo and Pupa are too young for that kind of thing anyway XD Friendship it is! :P

Only just found this, sounds good so far

Snrk, with how hyped she is just hearing that she'll attend the show, I'm worried that Scootaloo is going to set the new record for the youngest heart attack ever.

6984587 Hmm, nuclear romance.

... Somehow, the mental image of Pupa sitting at a school desk, nose buried in a book, all concentrated, is even more adorable.

Heh, Scootaloo isn't immune to Pupa's weaponised cuteness either.

To be honest, I never understood that, if I saw someone like Pupa, i'd be all over asking him questions and requesting that he changes his shape, that'd be so awesome. Just imagine games with a changeling, where he can change to fit the game.

Oooooh, maybe he'll be able to help Scoots with her flying.

7007243 It's mainly because of the recent history of ponies and changelings, and the immaturity of school ponies XD

Racism, tattoos, mispronouncing folks' names, immodesty, and cliques are NOT cool. These kids are the dweebs of the school.

7011036 I did say "trying to be" XD Trying and failing XD

Not enough comments here,so here is a comment. I feel bad for Pupa

7016710 Me too :fluttercry: Thanks for commenting!

Noooo, poor Pupa.

Scoots turned into a guy for a moment there :

Scootaloo stared at the ground for a moment before walking over and sitting next to the pegasi. He turned towards Pupa and whispered the word 'sorry'. Pupa nodded understandingly, before scribbling out the picture he was drawing in frustration as soon as his friend looked away.

7023527 I know :c

Why does Scootaloo keep doing that? XD His Her special talent is rule 63 apparently!

7044097 Thanks heaps :3 Sorry again for all the delays, just life being life ^^;

7024595 That is so much funnier of you watch the Mentally Advanced Series, especially the one before all the copyright claims from Hasbro.

Awww, sweet, though Scoots is going to be so disappointed once she sees her friends for who they really are.

7045967 Thanks :3 I haven't seen that series, I hope I didn't make an inappropriate reference by accident X'D

7044312 Yup :3 Unless you're in Ponyville x3

7049727 All voices are reversed in that series, so males have feminine voices and females have masculine voices. And Scootaloo is played as a total Casanova, almost reach and every line of hers is very non subtle innuendo.

7049895 Ah okay XD Wow XD I'm not the only one then! XD

i liked it but ther was a few times the u called skoots he

7061814 I'll go through and fix that now, thanks for pointing it out XD (Why do I do this so often!)

7061814 For some reason I can't find them (maybe because it's 1 am? XD)
Could you give me a couple of quotes where it happened so I can correct it? Sorry to be a bother lol XD

Yay! Scoots did good.

Yeah, changelings are way cool.

7062478 Yay X3 I couldn't go a whole changeling story without having a changeling do something cool X3

7106427 Sorry I've been delayed as heck with school work :( Will try to get the final chapter out as soon as possible.

7024595 Pupa did it too right at the end!

“I know right? This is so cool!” Scootaloo answered, standing up on his seat to get a better view, with a massive smile plastered on his face.

Whoa, Scoots got so excited her gender changed! :pinkiegasp: :rainbowlaugh:

7118535 *facepalm* Why do I keep doing this?

7118429 Maybe one day XD I think I'm all Scootaloo'd out at the moment ^^;

that part with dashy and the school pony that was funy

7118645 At least for Pupa it's plausible.

Nice ending. It pays to have friends in high places.

Pupa would have it easy with the Crusaders, tree sap is much easier to wash off of chitin.

Rainbow Dash gave the secretary a dissatisfied snort and stormed off. No pony stopped her being a good sister.

She returned a few minutes later, carrying a decree from Princess Twilight Sparkle.

im sorry but your denial was DENIED

Above them sat a labyrinth of ramps, hoops (on fire of course) and stormclouds, that put the school foals’ course to shame.

TO SHAME.

7171693 I like it XD You should have written the story XD

I have an issue with this teacher. She is violating the FIRST and MOST IMPORTANT rule of teaching: NEVER LET FRIENDS SIT THAT CLOSE TO EACH OTHER!!!:raritydespair:

Or in the words of the Offspring; "Gotta keep'em separated" :raritywink::trollestia:

Seriously though, I have never seen a teacher who let that many cliques form in class.

7007243 Dude, pretend and school plays got a lot more real!!

as if they’d tried to get some study done, then given up when they realised it’d take actual effort.

Wow, sounds like college.

on another note: studying

Ah, Scootaloo was privy to the moment when you suddenly realize the person you've been hanging with has fans. And you are simply there like, "okay....":applejackunsure:

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