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Lucky Dreams


I didn't choose the skux life, the skux life chose me. (Can also be found at luckydreamsart.tumblr.com!)

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It's the week before Hearth's Warming. Scootaloo is curled up in front of the fireplace, drinking hot cocoa and reading a Daring Do novel.

And then the fireplace starts speaking to her.


A spiritual successor to my (formerly cancelled) six star rated story, It's Not a Cold Dark Place.

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 41 )

Alright! These long years of wait is over!

Into tracking you go! :rainbowwild: ~ Mintstar

Clearly, the answer to every problem is fire.:scootangel:

Wow! This story has been great so far! Really looking forward to more! :rainbowkiss: :scootangel: ~ Mintstar

This is gonna get interesting! :yay: Also this deserves way more attention :applejackunsure: ~ Mintstar

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To be fair, I'm very happy with how it's doing so far. I mean, I feel I must be doing at least something right to get comments like this :pinkiesmile:

After every chapter I go to press the like button but remember I've already done it.

I have no idea where this is going but I like it.

Scootaloo lived on the tail end of Ponyville, where houses became fields, where roads gave way to trees, and where the call of adventure sang upon the blue moon breeze. The cottage stood in a lonely meadow, and she loved it. It was built from half brick and half shambles, and wore a sweater of ivy.

Oh my gosh.

I try to keep my Favourites shelf for only the best of the best of the best, the stories I'll remember for a long long time. Usually, it takes me a while to realize this is the case; how can I make that decision unless I've gotten to the end and discovered that the story still lingers?

Here, it took 400 words. Your writing is stunning.

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Sorry I didn't reply to this sooner. But thank you so much! This is honestly one of the nicest comments I've ever received :pinkiehappy:

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OMNI:I have a separate shelf for the best of the best.But you are right it probably already made to there.

TIME:Fire and scootaloo have been long associated this is an interesting take on it.
OMNI:HE MEANS THAT IT'S GOOD!

...Wow. WHY is it all the good stories have no attention? I mean seriously why.
Some of the best fics I've read have almost no likes.
And yours is one of them.

The fire was interesting, the dream concerning, but Rainbow disappearing from the pictures, now that was a hook.

Comment posted by Phantom-Dragon deleted Oct 20th, 2019
Comment posted by Phantom-Dragon deleted Oct 20th, 2019

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Sorry, I really dropped the ball on this one :facehoof:

I don't want to give an exact date, but I think sometime in the next month? Hopefully? There's something really important I've gotta concentrate on first (I have literary agents waiting on me!!). But once that's done, I'll finish this off and publish the last few chapters in one big go.

9th October 2018 "Check back in around 2 weeks"

I had a pony dream today and decided to take a break from reading chinese web novels to get back into pony fanfiction and it must be fate that the story I was most hyped for it's continuation is coming back soon.

Comment posted by Phantom-Dragon deleted Nov 30th, 2018

i am excited for this to possibly be back, I was hoping it would be completed. good to see you back here again

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Sorry! It really is almost done, I absolutely promise!! :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Phantom-Dragon deleted Nov 30th, 2018

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Yes, I think so. The ending is very almost done, and I'm just giving the older chapters one last look before I repost them :pinkiesmile:

(And by 'ending', I mean the entire last third of the story!)

Comment posted by Phantom-Dragon deleted Nov 30th, 2018

9275631: 13 out of 18 of your stories are unfinished. No one here owes you anything. But maybe you owe them a sincere apology for immature badgering with criticism made on a foundation of hypocrisy.

gaaaaaaaaaaa! I love it! it is so good:pinkiehappy:

Very interesting story, I greatly enjoyed it.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:

she heard the tiniest voices in the world. “Run,”

Been away for years, but never truly forgot about INACDP. Now I come wandering back to find it's been born anew. This is a good day indeed.

I love you, she thought to her aunts (were it not for the giant snowflake in her mouth, she would have said it out loud).

The giant snowflake in her mouth didn't seem to keep her from shouting out loud at the terror in the dark a minute prior, I merely observe. :derpytongue2:

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

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And thank you sooo much for reading it!! I only just saw your comments, but they've really made my day :pinkiehappy:

Fire doesn't just destroy the forest it also cleanses away the weak old growth so that the strong new may grow and flourish just as one who is baptized in fire is also cleansed and emerges stronger than before.

It'd be interesting as a result of her reuniting Canis Major and his pack they give her a gift of a blizzardpony form (pony with the ice traits of a blizzardwolf and the ability to control ice to boot) as a gift or a rainbow colored emberpony form (similar to above) though the flames are NOT a result of anger but as a result of a heart burning with love or a control over the wind.

Wolf transformation.

Just rereading for nostalgia sake.

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