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He's finally done it! After years and years of work, Doctor Whooves as finally crafted a time-travel device! Needing a pegusus that can build up enough speed to activate the device, he calls upon none other than Rainbow Dash to help him. . Once she gets back to the present, however, the world is a complete wasteland dominated by evil. What did Rainbow Dash do to cause this, and can she set things right?

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Doctor Whooves closed his eyes quickly, feeling something rush over him. He opened them again to see a rainbow shockwave flying in all directions, with what was left of Rainbow Dash lying motionless in a massive crater.
He picked up his device, mentally calculating. His eyes widened as he realized his mistake. "Oops."
A blue turian walked up behind him, placing a heavy hand on his shoulder. He took the device in his free hand, staring at it with mild curiosity. Handing it back, he gave the doctor's shoulder a quick pat. "That, my friend...is why you always double-check your calibrations."
Garrus stepped back, raised a fist to the sky, and promptly shot straight up into the atmosphere and back into his own universe.
Whooves stared at his invention in awe. "GENIUS!" he exclaimed, galloping back to his laboratory, leaving Rainbow Dash sprawled lifeless in the dirt.

THE END

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735987 An alternate story ending ALREADY??? I'm not even done with the story! :rainbowlaugh: I lol'd as well also. I tip my hat to you, sir, :moustache: and thanks for reading my story. :rainbowkiss:

NIce idea I can't wait to read some more. :rainbowdetermined2:

736327 Thanks! I'm almost done with chapter two so I might even post it tonight if I have time. :pinkiehappy: Thanks for reading! :rainbowkiss:

dis gunna b gud
pinkie rating
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
4 pinkie. Good Story In Making

775086 Thank you! I was out of the country for quite some time so I've written quite a bit of chapter two. I'm going to post it (hopefully) soon. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

nice story if I do say so myself:pinkiehappy:

1135451 Thanks D, I really appreciate the comment! Thanks also for the watch! :pinkiesmile: :yay:

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