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MaxKodan


Just a pony lovin' guy

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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves: CY 20000


Episode List! Read the first two first!

The Doctor has gotten a bit homesick for a solar system that works properly, so he takes Rainbow Dash on a trip to an alien planet for the first time. Upon arriving, the pair find the denizens of the planet a bit surprising. And when the Mayor of the city gives them a personal call, they're dragged into a game that nopony wants to play, but nopony can decline. Can they succeed and come out victorious? Or will they be trapped in the madness of the city's twisted idea of 'fun'?

Thanks to Karda4124 AKA Bookworm for the cover art.

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Chapters (4)
Comments ( 60 )

So yeah, that happened. Fans of the old series (Of Doctor Who) might know who we're dealing with here, but if you're not then don't worry: Everything will be explained.

Sweet new story :pinkiehappy: oh and for some reason most of it is like this just to let ya know. you may want to fix it :twilightsheepish:

Ooh... This may well be the best one yet!

No seriously, with the down thumbs, comment and tell me why! You have no idea how badly I want to know :applejackconfused:

1076622

Ah, I hate it when that happens. Like when an entire block of code is made completely useless by a single missing close-paren. :ajbemused:

All of my hatred.

1077564 Woo! Another story!

Seems interesting...

When you say old series, which Doctor are you refering too?

Old Who villain? I know the one you mean. This will be very interesting.:trollestia:

1079540
Anything before the TV Movie. I'm not narrowing it down more than that.

1080403

This guy knows what's going on :trollestia:i

Damn. Well then, this will be a surprise for me.

Well, anyways, this story is pretty awesome, and I'm interested in where this is heading.

Classic Who? This will be interesting.

1076467
Is it the celestial toymaker?

Pretty sure it's the Celestial Toymaker.

1092526
I just said that!:pinkiesad2: stop stealing my ideas!






*the second sentence was a joke*

1092987
Well I think you're right.

1094045
Not a problem. I wish the Celestial Toymaker would come back in the new series. Closest we've had is the Dream Lord.

1094056
He did return in a sixth doctor episode, but it was cancelled in the lost season 23, however, it was later remade as a book.

As always it's a good DW story, commending it.

A small nitpick: I don't believe Celestia and Luna created the astral bodies as the unicorns managed them before they appeared, but that's not relevant to the story, so move on!

1109456

More history behind the sun, the moon, and the princesses will be explored later, and in much greater detail. For now, they have a different perdicament to deal with :rainbowwild:

Another success. Brilliant character dynamics.

I honestly had no idea who it was until I read the comments. Rather disappointing with that, I must say. But I'm still very interested.

1142786

Wait, what are you disappointed with? I'm confused :applejackunsure:

1143092 Above comments possibly spoiling who the enemy is. Possibly.

Aaaand chapter 2 is up! Not my best work, in my opinion, but I'll work on improving next chapter, and I'll clean this one up later, probably.

*Looks at wordcount* Oh...well...huh. That's different...

Eeyup, the good ol' Celestial Toymaker, here to make things... interesting. Very interesting, indeed.:trollestia:

Maybe I'm reading into this too much, but Northern Star... if I'm not mistaken in my guess, this may have just gotten a bit more interesting on top of the Toymaker being involved.:rainbowderp:

1145653

The funny thing is that I know exactly what you're thinking.

The other funny thing is that I think you're wrong. Hadn't even considered that when I was writing her...I've got other interesting things in mind.

1145675

Yeah, I didn't suspect I would be right on that one, but when the thought came to mind I couldn't ignore the possibility of it.

1206691
1: No, in this case "A ways back" is a pseudo-slang used when one is too lazy to indicate a more exact distance.
2: You know, I have auto correct and that ALWAYS come up...It's Chagrin. To her Chagrin. Stupid thing...
3: Yes. Yes it is.
4: Yes. Yes it is.

And oh, sure, let me just get- Oh, right, after paying my bills I'm in the negative because I don't get paid til tomorrow >>;...

Some day I'm sure I'll pay you back for it. Some day.

Hey man, if you ask I can probably do a cover art for your next episode. ^-^

1238493

I'd love it if you did that! I've got a whole....zero submissions, so you'd most likely make the story pic, and I'll definitely add any links you like to the description so you can get out there a little more!

Also, 1206691, Did you want anything else linked there besides your dA?

1315210

Oh, no, I'll definitely link to your profile and your stories if you want. The next time I use your picture, I'll put it up there!

The pair looked around for the source of the strange voice.  Finally, upon looking down, they saw a small, wooden pony.  He looked hardly larger than a foal, but his mane was cut exquisitely well.  He was painted fully, with a great amount of detail apparently put into each facet of his body

I'm a real boy :rainbowlaugh:

WOOHOO! :twilightsmile:

I thought this would never get updated! :yay:

This took way longer than it needed to be.. :ajbemused: BUT! It was worth the weight :ajsmug:

2505135>>2504889

I know, I know...I'm sorry guys. Lots of things happened, lots of things changed, and lots of things are going to change in the future. My life is going to be rearranging itself once again, and hopefully with a clean slate I can build it to be the way I want it to be, and that includes writing more. I'm not sure when the next chapter of this story is going to come out (Need to think of something good for it), but I may be releasing another story, a shorter one, to tide you over.

2510380 apparently you didn't get the joke... :ajbemused: one word: gaben.

2511485 how about two words: Gabe Newell. if you don't know who this is... shame on you

2511546 do i really gotta do more explaining?

2517540 argh.. you'll have to find someone else to explain it to you because i can't find a good video that explains why i purposely replaced "wait" with "weight"

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