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Celestia and Luna are very competitive. So much so that when they find out that they're both in love with Twilight Sparkle, they decide there's only one way to handle this: becoming mortal. Will their disappearance weaken Twilight's availability for love, or will she choose a sister to spend her eternal life with?
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Is the whole giveing up there powers and being mortal only until Twilight kisses one of them or is it a pernamet thing?
6929797 Great question! Once Twilight kisses one of them, they go back to being who they were before.
6929831 okay just checking
Don't they have some mony with them to just buy a new tran ticked?
...... this is going to end badly, or they going to find out twilight is in a relationship with someone else, i guess sunset simmer or the changeling queen....or discord....yess go with discord cause that would be funny
6931725 I thought it would be funny for them to forget to bring anything useful with them. They're used to having things taken care of by other ponies.
6932155 okay
6932037 You'll just have to read to find out
oh
they gave cadence their magic, which means...
...so, THAT'S why the baby had such huge wings/horn!
6932826 Exactly. I hoped someone would notice my indirect explanation to the Flurry Heart situation. Once we see more of the character I hope to expand on how the magic influenced her. Would you be interested in that?
6932871
very much so
Ya I was abit concerned about them giving up there power and immortality that recklessly but if it's just a temporary thing then thank goodness. that wouldn't end well
OK now I'm vary interested I can't wait for more.
6932554 Don't you mean, wait to find out
.
6933007 That's always wonderful to hear!
Try to think of their choice as an ultimate sacrifice for love/learning experience instead of a random reckless decision. Cadence will handle things like day and night. I hope you enjoy the story
6933034 Same difference
6933048 Well, I guess I'll have to wait to read.
The Sisters haven't actually agreed on any rules of engagement. This bodes ill for Ponyville...
6933913 "Half of Ponyville has been destroyed!! What happened??" Doctor Whooves asked.
"Two pegasi are fighting over Princess Twilight." Derpy responded calmly.
"Oh. That's it? There isn't another enemy attacking, or a creature from the Everfree Forest?" The doctor asked confused.
"Nope, just a normal everyday friendship problem." Derpy said walking away.
Lol loved it hope to read more soon
6940314 Great! Thanks for the feedback! I love to hear that people are enjoying the story. Check out the blog post on my page to help influence the story a little
so funny, not sure why but i feel like by time those two get to twilight they be at each other throats......or making out.....
btw feed me more chapter, i need to read more it the only way i can escape the maddness....
6940590 Don't worry, the fourth chapter will be posted soon. I write this in my free time in a journal, so I need to type it up before it can be posted. I have most of Chapter 4 written, but right now I'm working on typing up what I already have. You won't have to wait too much longer I hope. I'm just as obsessed with writing this as you may be reading it
6940634 lol,. reading story on this website is what i do to relax, while i save up for new xbox, mine got stolen.....
6941003 That sucks. I'm glad this story has been an escape from negative emotions for you. I'll have a new chapter up tomorrow (probably). It all depends on whether or not I get the chapter finished and can show it to my editor. Good luck on your saving!
Sibling rivalry lasts forever, so now reading this brings a smile to my face because it's siblings being siblings and I love it and hope it stays that way so bring on the battle for Twilight!
6942637 I try to add little things here and there between them. Siblings argue over the smallest things, so I'm glad you're enjoying its incorporation into the story.
6943146 Haha yes siblings do, me and my two sisters would argue about everything and were always at each others throats, and looking back through all the memories it makes me laugh.
Oh boy this fic is bringing back memories. Twilight done exactly the same thing to what everyone me and my sister meets.
good fan fic, I likeing, I would love it and find it funny if after month, twilight meet both and ask why they as they are call them by their real name, not knew about the bet but figure the two were on a month long break, and figure out that they transfer they powers to cadence....
or she knew about the bet some how or figure it out, yell at them and tell them something that shock them.........but that just me.
6949227 I'm glad you liked those lines! They were really fun to write! Besides, Twilight is so adorable when she's embarrassed!
6949750 I'm glad you like it!
Ok. This is great. I see a few grammatical and formatting errors here and there. Nothing major. I think describing rather than just telling would make this great story phenomenal. Other than those minor complaints, I've got nothing! Great job! I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update.
6950952 Well, the next update is REALLY long, so I hope you don't mind a bit of a wait on the next chapter. As for the grammatical and format issues, would you mind going into more detail? It would be a great help!
6951249 Of course I don't mind! You can't rush perfection.
As for the errors, I would be happy to help. If you give me a day or two I should have a list ready for you. I want to reiterate that these are minor issues. I'm gonna have to weed through to find them again. Thanks for writing this!
6951353 Thanks for reading it! I want to have a career in writing someday, so the constructive criticism really helps!
6951377 Of course! And from what I've seen, I think you definitely have a future in writing!
Okay, sorry for the long wait, I've been sick.
Here are a few corrections I've weeded out:
could
Replace period with exclamation.
Appositive: commas before and after "Twilight Sparkle."
punctuation
Comma between 'someone' and 'are.'
Punctuation?
punctuation
backspace+punctuation
I think an exclamation point would be more appropriate here.
punctuation (comma or period) between 'competition' and 'even'
hit the space bar
have been
This sentence is too long. Try to make it two? For example:
spelling+question mark
6961122 This is where the drama tag comes in.
Today we learned: Autumn is terrible at staying in cover.
6961729 Breaking News: Luna found in the form of an orange pegasus ranting about the lack of servants in common life. Celestia has made no comment about the matter that we know of. We have yet to find the solar sister.
Shots been fired, now this will end badly.
Best. Word. Ever!
6985271 I'm glad you think so!
New words make book horse happy.
6982672 Let the battle begin!
So that's why Flurry heart is so Powerful
7020380 Exactly!
I'm planning on making a side story about the magic's influence on her at one point. Would you be interested in reading that?
Sorry for bugging you but do you know when the next chapter will be posted
7052174 Very soon. I'm having a kind of surgery tomorrow, so I'll be completely out of it, the day after that the new chapter will be posted. Sorry for the long wait!
7052189 It is okay I get it life comes first