This is the story of one mysterious stallion, Magicon. Hoof-picked by Celestia to be hers and Luna's highest and most trusted advisor and counselor, he has dedicated his adult life to helping them. But beneath the regal splendor and nobility, Magicon has a dark past and colthood that few know. When a threat is made against the princesses by an ancient foe, dark secrets will be revealed and true identities will emerge in an Equestria that will never be the same again.
Comments welcomed
good story and sad more
.......... the shit.....just got very reel......
images.cheezburger.com/completestore/2011/5/23/0af36e9d-da9e-45f3-9006-f679d05608ff.jpg
I don't get it, Magicon is talking to Celestia after killing her and luna? Does he have multi personality disorder or something like that?
948484. It's more of a paranoia. His sub-conscious is giving him flashbacks and other reminders of Celestia and Luna. He has traits of Multi Personality Disorder, but he's not crazy, yet.
951868
but he soon will, i can feels it
i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/117/012/tumblr_lj57goZvBh1qdjdp1o1_500.jpg
static.fjcdn.com/comments/HOLY+SHIET+_df551175272dd71ac5a51bd65315ef9a.jpg
nise
wow
what the buck
Wait, Magicon is being manipulated too?!
moremoremoremoremore!!!!!
Perfectly, for now
Watch out Magicon, they're becoming suspicious.
Muahahahahahahahahahah!
Twilight noooooooooooooo!
You seem to be rushing in your writing. It still good, but don't get in a rush more and more mistakes will pop up. take your time, you don't have a deadline
This story just gets better and better, and I have to compliment you on it. I await more and until then I will not sleep.
Shit hit the fan there
god damn is it possible for this story to get any better great job
what is it i want to know now and cape i think Magicon has RB locked in him
sleep is for the WEAK
First!!!
This fic needs a lot more credit than it gets, I mean seriously it's amazing.
Shit jus' got real.
Who will win? Nopony knows.
Perhaps just my unforgiving nature: Cadence let him off too easy
In hind sight he shouldn't have trusted Applejack.
I don't understand why more people don't like this, because its brilliant.
Moustache for you!
Twilight how could you be so stupid!
I wonder If Magicon will ever get caught that would be interesting especially if Twilight caught him.
Holy buck that was awesome best chapter EVAH
So Democratic ponies yeah that is right Bronies come get me
Annnnd the genius makes the idiotic move. Twilight Sparkle: another name to be added to the list, which includes the likes of Artemis Fowl, Emperor Palpatine, and so on.
Excellent work as always, keep it up!
I do not usually pester grammar but when I do it is really derped up. no joke fix that but it was really funny to come across.
Aww I thought he would go on the path of redemption oh well insanity is fun too.
ts3.mm.bing.net/th?id=H.4621613263553478&pid=15.1&H=160&W=160 What if the cape actually held a piece of Red Blood and that is what makes Magicon crazy and evil.
Oooooooooh he's gooood I love this in the mind of the villain
well fuck he is going after the elements this is not good
eeeehhhhhhh yeah sure Twilight forever or when Magicon gets around to you whichever comes first.
Oooooooooooh this is about to turn into the largest shitstorm Earth Equestria the entire universe has ever seen and it will all start with the royal guards.