Twilight and Rarity have finally taken time to hang-out together! Unfortunately, they end up dying in the process! Now, after meeting with Remmy the Grim Reaper, they have a task at hoof! To get their lives back, they must scare somepony before sunrise! Who in Ponyville is ripe for the scaring? (This story is a comedy, so be sure to enjoy!)
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haha that was a nice story. good job.
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Thanks a bundle for reading, glad you enjoyed!
Touching objects when they wanted to... didn't Rarity want to knock on the door of the Tree house in the first chapter?
Other then that good job on the story!
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Lol! Curse you and your flawless logic!
Perhaps Rarity... Just didn't want it bad enough? 
Either way, thanks for reading, my good friend!
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Obviously Twilight could and Rarity couldn't, because Twilight is best poni. a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/trollunaplz.png?1
No two characters can speak in the same paragraph. If someone has something to say, but someone else has already spoken, a new paragraph must be made, even if it means having paragraphs that are only one sentence long. That isn't a recommendation; it's a rule.
I want to read this. I want to enjoy this. However, I cannot understand a thing that's happening because I can't tell who is saying what.
Twi and Rarity are a little OOC, but that's obviously deliberate.