A smooth-talking con-artist named Mendax and his newfound accomplice Zoan, have begun to attract the wrong kind of publicity when their latest scheme grabs the attention of a shady character. The "boss" wants to rid Equestria of Ponyville, and he wants Mendax to help him. But when Mendax meets the fine ponies of Ponyville, he must decide what's most important to him. (Or more likely, YOU will decide for him.)
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Well, y'all, this is my first attempt at writing...or eh, typing anything outside of school. So please, any advice on how to better my writing or what you think I could do in the future to make my writing more appealing would be....appreciated.. based on how you give it of course. That being said, let's make due with the, what's the phrase here? Ehm, Constructive criticism!! So thanks a lot for reading the first chapter in what I hope will be a fairly liked story here on this fine, fine site. More chapters will be on their way, and yes, the Mane 6... and others WILL find their way into this story fairly soon, so don't get all y'alls pants in a bunch now. OOooooh, I can finally use these emotes...
You have a gift, my friend. This is bloody brilliant. Your prose is addictive, hypnotizing, even. And this is your first story? I'm very, very envious of you. Looking forward to what else you can dish up
Also, I'd recommend doing a google search for some cover art. People tend to skim over stories that don't have any. Dumb, I know.
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Golly, I appreciate the words, pal. I took your advice and got me a cover image or whatever you called it. It's amateur sure, but I ain't an artist. Once again though, pal, thanks for reading.
Well, y'all, the second chapter to my little story here. Thanks for reading it! I put a pretty good amount of thought into how I'm going to make this all link together. Once again, if you have any suggestions, or anything to say...uhm... well please say it. I DO apologize for the insane length of this chapter. Over 6500 words! That's ridiculous!
But, I had a lot to say, I suppose. Anyways, thanks for reading and I hope y'all enjoy!
I was very careful to make sure this chapter didn't overstay its welcome, like I feel the second one did. Though there was no story progression, really, I hope you feel a tad bit closer to the main characters, since that was the purpose of this chapter. Anyways, a short chapter can say a lot! Thanks for reading it! If you hadn't read it yet, but are reading this anyway... READ IT!
And this is where the fun finally commences!
A considerably short and boring chapter, but the next one will finally feature one of the Mane 6 and will be a bit more captivating, I believe. Thanks for reading, of course! Hopefully, you have an idea on how Mendax will help the Apples get their increase in sales, yes?