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this story has no comments then i shall make one. i like this, made me chuckle at the idea of tourist pickpockets
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Thanks for the comment. Yeah, that was a silly little twist, but there you go. Happy to see you enjoyed it.
I feel like I'm missing a reference to something. Still, a quite enjoyable read. Great portrayal of the Cloudsdale marketplace, and I love how Fluttershy views haggling as some strange, mystical gift.
Just one thing:
I really have no idea what to make of this metaphor. I suppose you mean the background noise would've drowned out a musician?
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As for the rest of your comment: Nah, you're not missing anything. This was mainly an exercise in writing OCs, so presumably that "missing reference" feeling is just a side effect. Not sure if that's a good thing (because it suggests the characters are well-realized enough to stand on their own) or a bad thing (because it doesn't help if the reader thinks they're missing a crucial piece of the puzzle).