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ReadingRainboom
I make AUs for colorful horses.
ReadingRainboom
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This is a good story.
I would suggest changing this to:
They weren't made sisters by some spin of a wheel. Just saying. No hard feelings.
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Also, change the semi-colon to a colon. It's a list, not a connecting sentence.