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rosebug


Life doesn't make narrative sense

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Everything was set to be a perfect day in Ponyville; the sun was shining, the birds were singing, and timberwolves were loose in Ponyville's town square. Luckily, as always, the Elements of Harmony were there to save the day at the expense of leaving Starlight Glimmer and the picnic she had planned for them all, alone to just sit and watch them from the sidelines.
Again.
It's hard not to feel left out when your best friends fight creatures and travel Equestria without you.
Thankfully, Starlight Glimmer has a little help from someone who knows all too well what it's like.

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6821323
"sans" is another word for without.

6821323

:twilightsmile: sans

Defined as without.

In this context, all the other friends were nodding other than Twilight herself.

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Nah, you're not an idiot, you just didn't know. Now you do! :pinkiehappy:

Now if only the show itself would address this in a similar manner, then explore it, we would finally have a Spike episode that would be widely spoken of with approval. Plus I would be immensely satisfied, and would probably hate the mane six a little less.

Thank-you for getting mildly drunk and punching this out, rosebug.

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Thanks so much! Reading your comment makes the god-awful hangover I had the next day worth it.

But seriously, I'm actually surprised it hasn't been addressed in the show so far, I think it would be good to spotlight Spike in a way that doesn't make him look like he has no idea what he's doing.

Oh, rosebug! Have you seen the Season 6 Premiere yet? 'Cause I think you'll be pleasantly surprised. :twilightsmile:

7073337
I did see it! And my first thought was, "man, this feels so familiar! Drunk me may have been onto something!"
But seriously, I really enjoyed all of the Spike and Starlight scenes. Thanks for thinking of me when you saw it too :pinkiehappy:

Wait, you wrote this while you was drunk?! :pinkiegasp:

Quick! Get drunk again and write another Spike and Starlight story!!!:raritystarry:

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Haha thanks! I'd like to write more Spike and Starlight stories so it appears I will have to stock up on alcohol to get some writing done :derpytongue2:

Well this a good story about Spike and Starlight. As I read more stories about Starlight along with the Season 6 Premiere, Starlight has grown on me. And you wrote this while drunk...I'm impressed :twilightsmile:

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Thanks so much! Starlight is growing on me too, especially after the season 6 premiere :raritystarry:

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