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Daxn
Vidi Terram Novam, Vidi Caelum Novum. Terram, Terram Novam in Hanc Vitam! Mazda descedentem et absterget omnia dolori lacrimas!
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Excellent story! I'm excited to see where this one goes! Are you going to write more?
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Yes, I shall write more.
6816869 Yay!!!!!!! I'm super excited to see where this goes!!!!! Good luck!!!
Well you already know my view on the story, but still reading it now was still as good as when I first looked at it, and that's coming from someone who doesn't like diaper stuff.
Anyway I'm glad you've managed to get it allowed on here. I can't wait to see how Rarity will deal with this over the coming chapters.
Also I'll admit, it was really cool seeing an image by me on a fic in my feed
Has science gone to far....
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And done what, if you do not mind me asking?
i wonder what going to happen next? will end in jail?
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For WHAT?
6903501 if does act on there feel and have sex with younger kids!
This is a very promising first chapter. Though it needs some editing, the language is intelligent and pleasant to read outside of the errors. I love the premise and the depth we see in Rarity's mental struggle. She's really very relatable, and reading her thoughts is very insightful. The pacing feels very natural and hooks my interest well so far.
I'm also a fan of padded females, so that's a bonus for me, though maybe it's created some problems for other readers. Still, I think this story deserves much higher voting, especially if it manages to be polished more thoroughly through editing. I'll see if I can help in that regard.
I look forward to finishing the next chapter as soon as my schedule permits.
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Oh, oh....
Holy crap...
Words utterly fail me.
I feel so, so, so honoured XD
Yes, if I would really like to edit this with me, if you can... please.
please continue, i see so much potential.
Is there a new chapter coming soon?
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I am trying to get it out as soon as I can
What does AB/DL stand for?
Whatever else you may think about Lemon Turner, he's really really full of himself. Wow.
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"Adult Baby/Diaper Lover."
...........what a sexist whore. Although, for some reason, I'm reminded of something....
........
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"Why, young sir... I must say, you seem to be in possession of a very fine Picto Box there! Are you a lover of pictographs, as well? There can be no villains amongst the ranks of Picto Box-lovers! Take your time. Look around, I implore you!"
— Lenzo
*echo* There can be no villains amongst the ranks of Picto Box-lovers!..... no villains amongst the ranks of Picto Box-lovers!.... the ranks of Picto Box-lovers!..... Picto Box-lovers!
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*Will read once finished.*
I feel so sorry for rares about AJ
whhhyyyyyy the feeeelllssss
"Which is better? To be born good, or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?"
- Paarthurnax
Seek psychiatric help? That'd be the healthy response anyway. Even if it doesn't take away the desire at least you could find ways to prevent yourself from acting on your desires.
Having a stroke there, Rare?
It's totally the perfect song for Pinkie Pie! It suits her to an absolute T!"
They're too busy seeking psychiatric help and/or living normal everyday lives to be doing anything that could land them in the news and thus the public eye.
Sunset Shimmer: "I'm the only voice of reason in this entire school."
"I drowned myself in purple until understanding what I say becomes a mind numbing chore that makes the writer of this post find me to be the most annoying character thusfar!"
"My parents got me the most inept professional help money could buy, so the whole field is completely useless in helping us!"
So you hung around with idiots who couldn't grasp science and math so they decide philosophy and history were the TRUE science, those lame plebs studying things like geology and chemistry don't understand true science at all!
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I'll be keeping my eye on you, you purple prose humper.
Yeah, Twilight! Don't you know History, Philosophy, and Language are the True Sciences? Our lord and savior over at Crystal Prep said so himself!
Wait...wasn't Roseluck the....well this can only go good places /sarcasm
"Consarn it Sunset, y'all know ah gotta be unreasonable an' unapproachable fer the sake a' conflict an' drama!"
You show up playing the most villainous classical music you can find, sounding alarms and flashing unpleasant amounts of light in their faces, then when they gather to see what the commotion is, you act like an egotistical ponce then try to shame them for some act they weren't performing. You know what? Fuck you, you deserve having shit thrown at you, jackass.
So you also brought a gang to fuck peoples shit up. Fuck you, go die you asshole, and not for your pedophilia.
YOU show up with an armed gang, you fucking shitlord, YOU are the provocateur here! I hope you get what you deserve, you shit stirring shitbag.
Oh goodie, I can stop looking at you as a character intended for sympathy!
Nope, sorry, you're too late. You've crossed the line. Sorry Lemon Turner, but unless you get hit in the face by rainbows you're far from 'redeemed'
"I mean, for now anyway. This shitbag stunt I just pulled will legitimately, if the author doesn't refuse to write it happening, get me sent away because this is an actual legitimate crime we're committing here."
Ah, a critic. I can always use one of those.
Most are fair points, but I am going to address a few.
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On the one hand, "Johnyy I Hardly Knew Ya" isn't a song that would suit Pinke's tastes either. On the other hand, this is suppsoed to be applejack trying her best to avoid to play the aforementioned.
I assumed that Twilight did not join the Rainbooms as a band out of inability in musical matters.
Not exactly. See chapter 7.
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Panic and shame can bring you to make extremely dumb decisions.
Considered that he has stated that he has met many of them, and considered that he has now decided that he has paedophilia as sexual orientation, this makes more sense than you would think. (That and personal experiences).
Well, while saying that Mathematics is not a true science is a bit of a stretch (Vico believed that it was, but was not the world's foundation either), according to Gian Battista Vico (namely the philosopher Lemon Turner and his companions took inspiration from) stated that, in order to qualify as True Science, a field of knowledge must be fully man-made, definition that includes History, Sociology, Languages and the like, while the other subjects -- since they are not made by human hand but by God's or Nature's hand -- and did indeed consider fields of knowledge such as Astronomy, Chemistry, Geometry, Geology and other such subjects as not True Sciences, but merely "useful sciences."
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See above & Rainbow Dash is in denial on Rarity's illness.
Considered how many people actually believe that in real life in this regard, this message cannot be stressed enough.
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Well, that is... troublesome. It seems I have let my views on the other "absolute half" of the issue slip through my judgment.
That has been already considered.
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She couldn't find a single happy song to play?
Didn't stop Sunset at the beginning of Rainbow Rocks.
Like immediately jumping to suicide right away. I know Rarity's got a flair for the dramatic but sheesh, love yourself at least a little, girl.
Still no call to brush off the entire field as useless. Just because the ones he saw, and the ones you saw, were useless fools doesn't mean they all are.
Well, while Gian Battista Vico was certainly entitled to his opinion so am I. I think any study of the universe at large or anything in it is a form of science. Trying to treat the ones they prefer as TRUE SCIENCE just seems like bullshit from my perspective.
He armed a gang of thugs and deliberately moved them to a location full of innocents to do violence. Lemon head over there can get fucked up the dick hole with a dozen tent spikes for all I currently care about him. Then he attempts to pull a 180 out of nowhere even though not five minutes earlier he'd declared everyone else in the building an acceptable collateral damage to getting revenge on two people there.
The alternatives are him being blasted in the face with rainbows or literally no one in the entire building(full of people who pretty much hated his guts to begin with) pressing charges. Incidentally, they now have a perfectly valid reason for their hate. Even if he does redeem himself this is indeed a very horrible 'I dun goofed' moment.
Edit: I'm also not seeking deliberately to be a critic. It's simply how I comment on a work. I type out my opinions on the matter as I go, whether they're positive opinions or negative opinions.
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I'm with you. It's nigh-impossible to see Purple Lemon as a likeable character. That has nothing to do with his sexual tendencies and everything to do with his towering egotism, self-importance, patronising behaviour and hypocrisy.
In fact, despite Sunny Flare's and Moondancer's actions this chapter, I actually dislike Lemon Turner even more. He does horrible things and acts like he's the victim when it's literally everybody else suffering. Sunny Flare actually took a punch in the face. Lemon Turner lets other people get hurt for his cause. He's too important, after all; too precious a genius and the one shining jewel in the dark sea of ignorance surrounding him.
I hope he pays.
Addendum: I should clarify that the problem with Lemon Turner isn't so much his character (which is deplorable as a person) but that it feels like the story is pushing for the reader to see him in a positive light. And with the latest chapter... That's not possible anymore, at least for me. He passed the Moral Event Horizon.
7228516 I wouldn't personally say he's crossed the moral event horizon. He just did something stupid that pushes him closer to it. If someone had died or he intended for such then yes, I'd say he hit the MEH.
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Hmm. Maybe you're right about that. But he came dangerously close at the very least. And a lot's depending on his conduct now, whether or not he understands that what happened is mostly his fault and not something he can hide from.
Hmm, good. Now use your time to reflect fully upon your actions and prepare to offer apologies to those you hurt.
You severely overestimate her chances, that or you left out a word.
.....what? No seriously, you lost me. The best translation I can come up with is as follows:
"Considered that they would dominate Midnight Sparkle and her desire not to be Midnight Sparkle -- will make me a more moral person."
....?
A much more sober one perhaps?
Well it must have happened off screen then, though they did attend the same school for a while, so there's that.
Did you just give up or is she honestly talking super strange?
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Fixed.
Perhaps it is me not using punctuation correctly, but I mean it as "Considered that they overpowered Midnight Sparkle, your cleansing powers should be enough to make me more moral."
Well, not really, as putting it that way implies he either sent a tiny flute, or has sent basically a container of candies, neither of which were my intention.
7237507 Ah, so he's hoping the care bear stare will make him less of a dickweed than simply atoning for his actions and trying to do better.
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*dude runs in* she's infected with the purple virus!
Someone's been getting into the ace attorney series.
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"Long time no see, how've you been?" It sounds so forced having people talk like that. Floridly written words are one thing but this is what she's actively saying. She's making the conscious choice to speak in the most unnecessarily flowery and extended way possible.
Thank you Applejack!
"no actual sex with minors actually happens in this story" well I'm not reading it then. good day I'm out of here
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I wished to show the details of Rarity's fantasies as it helped to both enchance the "will she or won't she" drama and make her more relatable, the site's rules (which are under a strict legislation regarding pornography underage subjects, fictional or otherwise) would not allow me to add them.
Naturally you can test it out yourself.
7410114 well how about you make a better version of it and send it as a word document in an email please?
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I cannot write sexually graphics scenes for this kind of story, so I garauntee that, aside The clearly-labeled-as-such clop chapter, there are no sex scenes meant to arouse the reader insidee. The rating were just a precaution, as I did suspect mods were not going to let this story pass otherwise due to its themes.
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Thank you very much for your comment.
The thing with Rarity's parents is, I felt that it would have reeked of LGBTQ comparisons from some, which would have brought upon this story more drama than necessary. Granted it would have been a good publicity boost, but still. Well, there is that, and some major problems in thinking up good ways to create drama with what little character we have about Rarity's parents, not without going in territories I did not want to go into.
As for the matter with AJ... I have got nothing. It was a little overplayed for no real good reason.
It is always a problem of mine: whenever I run out of material for the story, I truncate it. Granted in this case there was little to go for the ending, not without dragging on and on without any real point to it.
Disgusting.
Absolutely, utterly disgusting.
Twilight is so RICH, I... I can't find fitting words.
I hate rich people.
However, I feel a whole lot of sympathy for Rares, so please feel free to receive my congrats. :3
Now if you'll excuse me, I have a wonderful fic to read.
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Eheh, thank you very much.
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Hey shut up, Humanist matters ARE the actual science we all need.
8129804 I can't wait for the Humanists to get us the first inhabitable colony on Mars!
Operation "Telling the gals that I'm a pedophile while eating an ice cream"?
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We may not need human sciences directly to get there, but once you do start actually creating a colony, taking in account human nature while making the project for it may be useful.
But seriously,
Sunset, fuck you.