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The story was entertaining, but somewhat unfinished. I'd like to see what would Fluttershy do when she finally gets freed (some kind of playback to the CMC maybe? Tie them up for the night?)
I'm not a diaper fetishest, but I'm not judging anyone who does clop to this. Just sayin.
6155625 Maybe that could be a sequel?
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Yeah, it's definitely a fetish themes story. Perhaps I could break it up into chapters next time and make that a *bad ending*
Still, thanks for the honest review.
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Thank you for being understanding. It's only a gripe I have because diapers "aren't my thing." At least you put a warning nice and bold in the top of the description. It certainly caught my attention straight away and told me what I was getting into.
6157322 Yeah, that would probably be a good thing to do. Though I'm curious, if Fluttershy getting revenge on the CMC is the 'Bad Ending', what would be the 'Good Ending'?
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Ah, not quite. The current ending would likely be the bad ending, while the good ending could consist of Fluttershy successfully 'staring' the CMC and getting revenge on them. It would give the reader a chance to choose between the two.
In addition, perhaps a 'fetishy' ending and a 'non-fetishy' ending would work as well. The non-fetishy ending would feature Fluttershy simply stuck in the crib, no bonds or anything. Knowing myself however, I prefer the former.
Well, for high octane fetish fuel, it's decent enough. Also, I'm a sucker for diaper-mitts. Fluttershy being distinctly distressed and the CMC not getting any comeuppance tarnishes it for me, though.
The story had a nice area of theme and stuff.... But... just the fact that leaving Fluttershy in her "prison" liek state kinda destroyed the mode. Plus Twilight of all ponies should have known to second guess the CMC's idea of fun. Plus Rash developments. yeah I would like it if she was able to get out.... but just leaving the story of her still being trapped... kinda pushes me on the not like list. I won't dislike this but I'm just giving opinions
6177127 Eh, I suppose that's sorta just my fantasy, even if it isn't practical or makes sense later on in the storyline. Maybe Twilight comes back; ponies come looking for her, etc. - it's up to the reader.
Either way, thanks for the review.
6179213 Hmm.. I fyou liek I can give you an idea of a nice story you can try out. how about this a pranking idea of a pony being treated as a foal as they are lifted from their house by parasprites like in the game Yoshi's Island and carried to the castle just an idea
6179755 Hmm, I'll think about it.
6179856 anytime to help out
I can see the attached somehere but never was my thing of filling and suck in used diapers. The bond part maybe and forced diapering yeah but not the extreme usage and such parts.
Really enjoyed it but couldnt she fly away? I mean through the window or could the cmc jump so high it was useless? Anyway Lived it sequel maybe with rainbowdash or rarity since its like there sisters 9/10 really liked it
A pretty enjoyable story. I definitely appreciated the forced diapering (even better with extra-thick padding) and bondage parts. Like 6186574, not much of a fan of messing, but I can overlook it for the sake of the people who are.
I'd just complain that Fluttershy didn't think of using her wings to try and get away (a situation that would've been easily remedied by the appropriate application of duct tape) and also that the CMCs come across as a bit mean (especially at the end, not checking on Fluttershy before leaving like they do), but I guess a bit of OOCness can't be helped in that kind of story.
Hope to see more like that from you someday. In the meantime, have my fave.
6177127 agreeble poor fluttershy
Is it weird that I found this story to be rather dark, because I didn't find it funny, no offense to the writer
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None taken, supposed to just be pure fetish fuel.
I hate to say it but this story is the first one I disliked.
I loved this story, I wish there could be alt. endings. Like with fluttershy Using the stare first thing and diapering the cmc with no remorse. I really hope there could be more!
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I know it's been 4 years since the prequel, but could you write a sequel
And... Fluttershy died from thirst. The end
ok that was mean of the cutie mark crusaders, I feel bad for Fluttershy