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After a thousand years, Luna is finally free from her torture of the Nightmare. Yet, even if she is no longer a monster, the common pony cannot seem to see her as anything but. Due to this, Luna is desperate to find something that she can use to start making herself appear as a more modern mare, something less out of legend and fear. A photo shoot seemed to be the best option, a chance to wear modern nightwear and show the world who she truly was. Unfortunately, nightwear has come to mean something else over the thousand years...

WARNING: Contains diapers and adult ponies wearing diapers, with suggestions of Adult Foal tendencies. If that is not your thing, then please do not read this story.

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This is nice, though I do wonder how Princess Celestia could keep the information about what the photo shoot involved a secret from Princess Luna?

6495151 When I read the title, I thought Luna would need diapers, probably due to the moon
s gravity affecting her control

6495166 You know, I don't think anyone has ever written that sort of fic.

6495262 I might due it for the collab some day

At first I lold, and then I lold again

thank you for showing princess luna in such a positive way! mit was so refreshing to see it! that she cares and is trying so hard to change for the better! great story and a hearty well done!

6495355 Maybe "Gravity" would work?

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The idea that I had was that Luna didn't really understand what the photo-shoot actually involved, thinking that nightwear meant a nightgown or such, basically pajamas. Celestia immediately understood, but that's what the smile was to suggest, that Celestia decided that it would at least be good for a laugh if not more.


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Well, I don't want to write Luna immediately in diapers, just because I'm thinking of making this a series, and I would like to take it slow, since I feel that would be more realistic. That was my thought process anyway.


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Thank you! I've always liked Luna, I love the idea of someone redeeming themselves and such.

The concept is cute. The mechanics, however, leave much to be desired. (grammar, story flow, etc.)

-there's no "one" big thing that needs fixed, btw, it's lots of little issues that add up to, well, you don't get an upvote from me.

Hmm actually pretty well done, you get a like and a favorite. The grammar and content could use a little editing and the flow is a bit fast, but it's actually quite well written, I look forwards to more.

That was a really awesome story. I liked it so much. Personally I would include some elements that I like, but you did a great job anyway. One of my favourite parts was when Princess Luna was trying to guess what was the garment that she had to wear, the description was good, it's curious how all the writers that I have read (including me) compares the diapers with pillows and clouds hehehe, but I couldn't understand so good why Luna needed a lot of time to know that the garment was a diaper. Can you explain me that part please? I mean. Luna never saw a diaper before being banished or those diapers were too "modern"? At least I think that diapers are really easy to recognize.

There was only one thing that I didn't like.. I get confused with lots of dialogues. I couldn't understand in some parts who character was talking in that moment or when was finishing one dialogue and beginning a new one.

Oh. And one last question. Have you planned to write a sequel? I think you have good elements to write it. :twilightsmile:

Pretty standard affair to be honest . I'm not expert so take it with a grain of salt . Thumbs up at least

Please write a sequel!

Interesting, but I don't see the jump in logic of Celestia from being a cover model for the product and wanting or needing to wear them. That said, could just be :trollestia: by doing it anyway to mess with Luna and the guards.

Hum wished that I had seen it before and that you had continue it back then.

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Sorry about that. I written the story during college and unfortunately finals got in the way of life and everything. I’m out now for a while. Been working on another idea someone gave me involving the princesses still, but I do plan to continue this story. I have some written already but I hit the dreaded block of explaining why Luna would try it after realizing what it meant.

I really hope you got something else up your sleeve. One story is all it took to get me hooked on your work. Well done.

A really nice story that I read few months ago and I loved it :pinkiehappy: but sadly I forgot it a bit with the time and the worst part, I also forgot to leave my like, favorites and comments :fluttershysad: But I'm here for doing that now :twilightsmile: I have to say that those stories with diapers modeling, are quiet curious for me. That environment of fashion, fancy and luxurious mixed with diapers is a pretty interesting mix :twilightblush: and if you add some cute elements and the usual plot of a pony realizing that she loves to wear padded garments turns it even better :ajsmug: It has also a lot of sense that the princess of the night is the model of a product to prevent night accidents. How I never thought that before? :rainbowhuh:

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