This is a story about Sweetie getting what she's always dreamed of, and her desire to keep it despite the opposition of so many of her friends. She meets the stallion of her dreams and he falls for her too, but he has some well-founded reservations. She has met her Prince Charming and caught him, so surely her "happily ever after" is just starting?
Come with Sweetie as she explores her new found feelings, and join her in finding out where they may lead.
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Notes: This is a story about foalcon, but I don't intend for there to be any sex scenes. I will change the tags if I'm ordered to by the mods, but I plan to keep it "teen".
If you find this fic too slow and decide to give up on it, go and take a look at the short story it was based off. It's pretty much the same thing, but in less than three hundred words! Also, don't read that yet unless you want the plot for this story spoiled -- obviously.
Pre-read by my beautiful assistant the vastly underappreciated Accidental Brony. Go and check his stuff out, it's always bugged me that it gets so many fewer views than it should.
Just something I forgot to mention -- it's nice when you leave comments along with any red-down-pointy-thumbs. That way I get to know what it is you don't like about the story.
I'll wait some more chapters before I can vote it.
i like it so far. it certainly left me wanting to read more.
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Good to hear it, looks like you're in the minority according to the bar. On the positive side, for some reason the opposition just makes me want to write the rest even more.
5349599 well i'm glad, because i would never forgive you if you stopped.
WHAT DID SHE REALIZE??
Things that come to mind:
- She has feelings for him.
- He has feelings for her.
- He had a growing erection.
Also, I don't know if it's a British spelling thing or not, but "realised" isn't recognized by my browser's spell-check.
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- He had a growing erection.
It booped her on the nose.
Putting "z" where there should be an "s" is one of the most common quirks of American, right after putting "r" and "e" the wrong way around.
5352052 Heh. English. At least the important words are the same, like "erection" and "boop."
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and 'Throbbing'.
This tragedy needs more chapters.
So far this is good stuff keep this up. I shall place it in my watch and tracking list so I can get an update as soon as possible.
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I was away from the internet for a couple of weeks, but the next chapter's almost there. Just some tricky dialog to work on.
5352014 'Tis a British my dear (insert continentally appropriate condescending term)
now off you pop! (Sips tea vigorously)
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"Continentally"?! My god, sir, you insult us! The least to do with the continent, the better.
Good to see this posted up here. Let me know if you still want my help with future chapters.
(Coincidentally, I'm hoping to make a return sometime this year myself, too...hoping...)
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Will do, will do. May be a while before I can work out a story line and stuff again, though.
Looking forwards to your return as well, I was wondering about whether you were gone, when I came back.
Tell me there's more, PLEASE tell me there's more. 😢